This is a good story. I like Fili's willingness to stay and to look out for his little brother. I also liked how you showed Thorin's concern over his two nephews who are barely adults.

A very neat little character sketch. My favorite bit was: "The latest incident - which had seen Kili tripping over a seemingly invisible obstacle and knocking himself unconscious upon landing on rocky ground - had hardly been reassuring proof of his brother's capability on this quest." LOL! I think you did a great job with characterization. I love both Thorin's determination to protect his nephews-this is my second favorite bit: 'Fili hadn't even noticed that his uncle had left his side until a voice rang out from the entrance of the cave they were currently staying in - risking the sleep of every dwarf (and sole hobbit) in the cramped space - in order to issue a final instruction. "Remember to keep a closer eye on that brother or yours. If he nearly kills himself again I'll be dragging him back to his mother by his ear."'-and Fili stating that he could not leave. Thanks for sharing!

Great story.

Awws to all the Durin goodness. Yet another great little fic from yourself. Love the Durin family!

Love it and can't wait for more