this is such a beautiful story. Padme is a mature, witty, considerate wife here, much better than the neglectful workaholic depicted in the Clovis arc of the clone wars series. Though I would hate Padme if she seduces Anakin and then gives up on him like she did in ep3(cuz I simply hate to see miserable Vader), you have made their interaction much more enjoyable. I can really feel why Anakin would not let her go and would sacrifice everything for her. Bravo!

Good story

This was one of the most well-written star wars fics I've read. I do hope you continue it one day. I appreciate the depth you've given to Anakin and Padme and I think it tracks well with what happened in canon. They both are strong people with allegiances, but have an intense weakness for each other.
Hope to read more, glad I got the chapters I did :)

Lovely!

Loved it!

I really loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next chapters to come out

I really like this book! plz update

I like a lot of the changes you've made to the story and characters. While Anakin has serious issues with jealousy that he needs to deal with, Padme has always had the upper hand in their dynamic, and she did lead him on/toy with his affections a lot in the beginning, albeit unintentionally. It would help if the tables were turned a bit, or if there was more of an effort on her end to ease his insecurities without chiding him like a child.

Update please! I love your story

more its so good!

Well, at least this fic was unfinished in a happy portion of the story.

Loved it :)
Is it too late to be updated?

aww I just finished this and now I want more!
This was a very hot and honestly good story with enough fluff and smut to make it very tasteful

I just stumbled upon this story and I really enjoyed it! Nice work and can't wait to see what's next.

The plot makes no sense to the summary. She rejected him. Not exactly reverse of canon in who chases who..