Awesome story! You write the dialog between the characters so well! Thank you! Your stories are all terrific.

“Alright, show of hands. Who saw that coming?"

Your Deeks cracks me up. Oh how I wish you still wrote for this show, I’m starting to memorize these I’m rereading them so much. ;) So far you’re the only writer I’ve found where I enjoy the flow of the stories and the characters. So occasional reread I shall do. :)

Just a comment on your intro (recognizing that it was written a long time ago: I regret that there seem to always be people who are unable to provide encouraging comments or constructive criticisms to authors, fanfiction or other genres. I personally am in awe of people who can create a plot which is enticing and exciting while maintaining the established characters of a given tv show, movie, etc. (Sorry to respond in kind, but I've got a pretty good idea of the talents of those people.)
I know it's incredibly hard work and I'm not even within years of being able to write as well as you have in this story and your other works. Thanks much for sharing this with NCIS LA fans.
Best, Vicki

Awesome fanfiction!

Good story

I must say I'm very happy your name/description wasn't enough of a turn off for me. Though I an disappointed that there wasn't a single banjo in the whole story...
that said there is no way Deeks would have flown to LA with an inner ear injury. I think I can forgive him though: I wouldn't want to drive back either.
off to raid your profile for other great stories,
V

This is a very well written fist chapter. I have to admit though, your title and description nearly kept me from reading it. If I hadn't been on a Callens and Deeks kick I likely wouldn't have read it.
As it is I can't wait to read the next chapter.
V

Awesome story

Absolutely amazing! One of my prison all favs. I only wish u had played up sick deeks a bit more

great story! loved it!

what a great beginning! poor deeks ;-)

I just want to tell you how much I love this story. I love team fics where they go to new places and your stories are perfect for that. You also capture the characters perfectly and have such great humor too(especially with the ninja turtles!). Thank you for this!

Yay! You are really good at capturing their characters through dialogue. I am impressed! Woo

i really loved this story - got a little concerned half way through when you said it was focusing more on Deeks and Kensi rather than Deeks and Callen - but it didn't really affect my expectations. There was enough Callen (just) for me. The pace of the action was perfect, the characterisation and interactions, and the humour...fantastic.

The only thing I find strange is that you write in the present tense, unusual, that is all - and it doesn't take away from the enjoyment at all.

Glad I found this one - thanks

You really like to beat up on Deeks, don't you? It seems to be a common thread through your fics. Still, this was another great story, thanks for sharing.