When will there be NaruHina development?

And now for the next 25 chapters. We are finally drifting away from the canon. I loved everything about the Tsunade arc but I was hoping that Sasuke would run into his brother. Still it was nice to see Naruto witness exactly how much hatred his teammate has for his brother.

As for the original arc we are into with more OCs I’m liking everything. I thought for a moment Tenten would get shot up with that mysterious drug to save her life. I also am curious if Hinata will be the next person to join the fold in knowing about Naruto’s status. Also I noticed Sasuke’s Chidori limit is increasing which is a subtle way of letting the reader now his reserves are getting larger. Really want him to ask Asuma about enhancing his weapon with wind chakra and finding out about his lightning affinity. I’m assuming this mission will be wrapped up shorty and I’m looking forward to the next 25 chapters.

Sigh. It’s be far too long since I e checked up on this story. I really need the refresher so I’ve started reading again from the beginning. It’s great because I get to fall in love with it all over again. I don’t remember much so I’m looking forward to finding out if Orochimaru’s blade will return or will Enma keep it. I’m also wondering if ten years have pasted in the current chapter and if the trade deal is done.

I’ve stated it before but I really enjoy seeing Naruto and Sasuke working together. I was pleased to see they had the heart to heart so early. I loved the way Sasuke’s willpower to resist the curse seal is boosted by his hatred for Itachi. Although I can’t remember what happens when he finds out the truth I’m definitely looking forward to it. I also like all the extra pieces of detail we got in the canon story. Like how the invasion was dealt with by Konoha, Gaara slowly turning into a better person, Hinata and Neji making up, etc etc. All in All I can’t wait to catch up and I’ve decided to leave a review every 25 chapters to reflect on my thoughts and feelings.

Nice

Very good fight against sasori.

Always glad to see an update from you.

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great update and great chapter with Kiba i was wondering if you were going to do the next chapter with the Naruto Girls ?

New chapter Happy day

The fight was very interesting, the Hyuuga are truly the best suited to fight a puppet master although Kiba and Shino are not behind Hinata in the fight.

I wonder if the present Sasori is using the same jutsu of Kisame and Itachi earlier fights.

Overall it was a good chapter.

it always irritated me that sakura had the nerve to yell at sasuke for being a coward back then

Interesting... meep

As addition to my last point, that guys were revolutionaries and yet order was shown as dictatorship, repressiveness, military, murder and not as mutually organized and decided selfgovernance. Yet these revolutionaries were shown as hooligans, as rapistswhy not child rapist or kitten murderers? They were shown as wanting only chaos, as young men who contrasted with the old farts that are shown as protecting people but who actually use their power over the whole land and ressources for themselves while the young have no say over anything. While the young work hard the old farts reap the benefits, control the farm, the workshops that the young work on. Those shrivelled up men who can hit, bully, insult, patronise the young because they pull the strings and they have power . All the rapes that go unpunished, untold because the perpetrator holds power in the village that scares the victims from speaking up. Why accuse the village elder of a rape when the village elder leads the village trials.

À Revolution is portrait to result in chaos and death. Yes, because the oppressors l, feudal lord and military will murder people who only want freedom. But that is conveniently neglected to be mentioned. It is ignored how feudal Lords and the shinobi military are the source of all the wars, assassanitions, genocides, all for their power plays, toying with human lives for the benefit of a tiny minority. .Every other year or so there's war in the Ninja world, every few decades or so there's a world war. None of this would happen without the Lords and kage, without the countries. were the peasant, the workers to govern themselves in small communities there would be order. The absence of hierarchy is order for then people come together and debate until they agree on several rules. They establish order together and there will be no need for insurgency as there is no group that is supressed and there won't be war as there's no group of people in their ivory tower pulling the strings without any opposition. War is unpopular amongst the general populace.

Whoever has written this though, I congratulate them atleast on the technical aspects of the writing which is the only reason why I've read this story until the 23th chapter. The writing is far above the average.

Most of not all Naruto fanfics are authoritarian propaganda due to them taken place within the framework of the shinobi system. This story is in parts so crass and aggravating that it actually sacrifices some effectiveness of our ts propaganda but with the right (speak messed-up) audience it can mess them up even further.

This story is pure brainwashing and propaganda full of manipulation in favor of authorianism with its torture, bullying, bossing around, destruction,inefficiency, crushing of spirit, drive, moral, emotions l, free will, humanity, etc. I strongly recommend not to read it. How team 7 was portrayed to deal with this bone dick was already too much but chapter 23 is the final straw. Bone dick claiming the murder on these two guys to be necessary and then Naruto arguing back "I don't like that it's necassary" reinforces in the reader that immoral orders are always necessary because one doesn't like it. Naruto is using an argument ignoring the faulty premise "It is necessary" gas lightning the offended reader into thinking the murder was necessary. There not being a well-founded opposition to bone dick makes this fanfic suspicious and the manipulation in favor makes it propaganda, though it might not be intentional but the product of an alike mindbone dick being a self insert of the author

This bone dick better prepare himself for being tortured to death on a mission as soon as team 7 got strong enough.

You know what would be gold? That modified smoke bomb that Toreo taught team seven against Itachi, I would love to see his reaction to that.

Its that a hint for a battle between two members of the seven swordsman of the mist?