| Reviews for Innocent Green Eyes |
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  mr. clever chapter 18 . 9/7 Les Miz? seriously? |
 TheHiBot chapter 24 . 4/7 I absolutely love this story |
| ShortFandomPerson chapter 3 . 9/10/2018 Yes thank you Bruce for buying loki his dress! |
| ShortFandomPerson chapter 2 . 9/10/2018 The ending was the best! And piss off all of you (not wonderful brother thor) and Natasha in particular. He can wear the dress if he wants too. |
| YoBreadYo chapter 4 . 8/6/2018 Skyrim is my favorite video game! Love the Easter egg! |
| Jenmoon1 chapter 24 . 7/4/2018 This is a great story |
| DiahKu chapter 24 . 2/23/2018 love it |
| Ghost Wolf 114 chapter 2 . 1/12/2018 lol ya I think he bore children in female form to? |
| wenduo chapter 24 . 12/29/2017 Aww I think this is the most Loki fiction I have read so far, it is just so good! Kind of hope you once again later will write a few stories for the fandom! |
| ongjulynn17 chapter 20 . 12/24/2017 The plot in itself is quite nice, but the way its written makes reading it quite confusing to piece everything together. At the moment one thing is happening, but then suddenly 20 other things pop up and it makes it quite hard to follow. If there were 5 stages to write a fic, stage 1 being "its a fab idea stuck in my head" and stage 5 being "all good to go, ready to be published", I'd say this fic is stuck between stage 2 and 3. Also to make it easier on the readers eyes its a good practice to read a chapter for any potential spelling/grammar mistakes before publishing. It's a good try though! Thanks for writing it 3 |
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/8/2017 I thought this was going to be a good story and it was for the most part, but some of it just didn't make sense to me because it got confusing. Not only was there kid Loki, there was lady Loki and adult normal Loki and it doesn't really make sense. Then the mortal babe at the end? How come all these Loki were about? And lady Loki, you made her sound like a messenger at first and then that was it, kind like a message then would disappear. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/3/2017 Awwwwwwwwwww I love this |
| katherinebocko chapter 14 . 10/19/2017 Yaya peter |
| TweakyGhostLover chapter 2 . 7/27/2017 GO STEVE Aww Awwww lok Lol Thor YAY HE GOT it HES GONNA CHANGE HIS GENDER GO LOKI Lol everyone backs away and Thor just continues eating being used to it and knowing what's happening YASSS LOKI XD XD XD THOR |
| TweakyGhostLover chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 awwwww SMART LOKI GO LOKI Awww DAMNIT tony Clint Awww GO LOKI YAY LOKI NO TONY YOU DID NOT JUST SAY THAT NO awwww no LOKI poor loki NOOO awwww |
