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So... this is like I Pokémon version of CoC?... I approve.

I have to say that this story is great. Could've been more chapters though. I'm bisexual at that so that made a lot of sense. But try more chapters next time.

And, in the space of two short moments, an entire universe ended and began. Reborn, with fate shaken to it's core.

Whether you give it another go or give it up i don't care but I at least want this story back up so I can reread what was here. It was sooo adorable! It would have been nice if you finished it sure but I will take what I can get. Don't be a jerk and take down what you wrote already its cruel.
If your having writers block try asking for ideas or such. I had plenty of ideas while reading your story that you could have gone with that would have kept it plenty smutty but a bit more realistically romantic.
Please hurry up and re upload the chapters I come back to reread it and I find you take it down its hella frustrating with authors do that.

Dang it even if you don't wanna write anymore at least keep your dang storys up for us to keep enjoying yeesh thats just cruel to the people that enjoy reading what you have at least.

Wwwhhhyyy is it so good.

Who's Chelsea? Last time I checked she wasn't in the story.

please make more its really good

I love your erotic stories. I'm bisexual as you probably figured out. We actually have a lot in common. I didn't know there was anyone that was like that besides me. Thumbs up to you and your awesome stories.

I Love chapter 2, its too bad that Machoke doesnt get much attention in general, there are so few stories about him

please update. this is such a good story.

hope you make more

i actually liked it when it was just the three of them

I like this story. :D I don't really care if a story is gay or not lol.