| Reviews for Within Our Crumbling World |
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  Rishabh chapter 4 . 10/16/2017 Where is chapter 5? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/5/2016 Plz update soon |
| aman chapter 4 . 3/7/2015 when the nexts chapter |
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/15/2015 yay drew dies like in the movies (not really) but 123 were descriptive |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 really great first chapter |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/4/2015 Do you think you can do a part 5? I love this series too much to already stop reading it. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4/2015 Its a very depressing fanfic but i still love it so much! May was always my favorite character in pokemon. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2015 I love it so much! |
 Agent BM chapter 1 . 11/22/2014 Too Bad May & Dawn Don't Travel With Ash Anymore, At Least I'll Be Seeing Them In The 20th Anniversary If It Happens. Ash Is Currently With Clemont, Bonnie & Serena In Kalos. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/14/2014 More chapters |
| Yusei chapter 4 . 6/20/2014 It's not a bad story you have thought,I love the way you have described the surroundings and I would prefer you to continue to make chapters |
| pokeman blood chapter 4 . 3/29/2014 Mother fucking cliff hangers y do u do dis wish I was harry P. Wunder if there's a spell 2 make the skum that is cliff hangers go 2 hell :-P uve just been birnd no uve just been flamed hahahahahah:-) :-) ;-) |
| pokeman blood chapter 1 . 3/29/2014 What the fuck is with cliff hangers stop it now I have a lot of friends who wood stop reading ur fan-fiction if I told them 2 so stop by ur next fan -fic. Or face the rath of less followers persisly 9 |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/10/2014 Sad But all-around great story. Thank you for making it :') |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/29/2013 Chapeter 5! |
