God, the main character is an idiot lol. Doesn't even kill Yurt when he kills Urbain and puts everyone else in danger. Also Yuria dying... It's sorta depressing me. I don't think I can finish reading this.

Had to come back and reread this, still beautiful, Thanks for Writing!

I'm rereading this story for the third time now and I still love it more and more. You probably made me cry on my first reading, and that last segment of this chapter hit really hard for some reason. I'm probably throwing this review into the void right now, but I felt like this was worth praising again.

This is the greatest thing i have ever read in my life. Thank you so much for creating this amazing story :)

this is one of the greatest things i’ve ever read.

You should mark the story as completed now that it is done to encourage people who want to bing read

Man, what a amazing story. I loved it, not many great long demon's souls stories, so of course high praise needs to be given to someone that does it.
Well done man, well freaking done.

Nice story.

I'm possibly going to sound extremely nitpicky now but the Maiden's eyes is obscured by wax. Thomas tells you this as early as first arriving in the Nexus (After dying to Vanguard or Dragon God)

This is my third time reading this and I just noticed the reference to soul tendency. Very nice touch.

This is a masterpiece, a work of art. You Sir are the best but i cant help hope for an epilogue because i just want to see to them one last time .

I'm honestly saddened upon finishing this story, you have major talent my friend I've read a lot of good stories but this one is easily on my top ten and I hope to see more

PRAISE THE SUN!

good story

I reread this, it's literally the best FanFiction I've ever read. I've read quite a few by now.

probably already said this before but keep writing dark souls 1 &2 &3 bloodborne you have such talent a true diamond amongst all these rocks keep writing!