Good story.

Ooh, Shino finally appeared! Yay!
I'm glad this was updated again. I missed it. John gets to show off his awesome 'Shift' powers again and Sakura and Syaoran are just awesome.
And those were amazingly bad puns. I loved them. XD

I quite liked the change of style here to an almost diary like style. It works well in terms of getting all the information across.

It did feel a bit like a little island of information though in that this one did not have such a strong story structure as your other work. There didn't feel as if there were a defined start/middle/end. I realise it is a prologue but it neede something to anchor it - not sure what. Maybe a top and tail from the narrator linking it to present day or something. However I do think your storytelling strengths do come through. It is clear how much you really enjoy writing and it comes across in your buoyant language.

SHINO SHINO IS THAT YOU ARE YOU DRUNK DRIVING GET IN THE STORY HURRY I'M EXCITED

Anyways. STILL SO MUCH CAR-SPEAK. I FEEL SO LOST XDD But enough of it was non-car-related to understand that this was a cool update, complete with John shifting easily to multiple cars and stopping robbers! Looking forward to the next one :3

SO MUCH CAR SPEAK
BWAAAAAA CURSE MY GIRLY QUALITIES
Anyhow.

The confusion has been lessened! I finally understand more! I am excited!
And John, you turned in a drunk driver. That's awesome, dude. Keep up the good work. :3
"Wait a couple of minutes, and then punch me in the face as hard as you can." ...XDD

Looking forward to more! :3

Whoo, a bit of expansion on the Shift powers! And now he can possess random people...is he going to possess that Cinderella Girls girl? I forgot her name. XD

I'm looking forward to the rest of it. CARDCAPTOR SAKURA IS STILL AWESOME. JUST SAYIN'.

Nice job

SYAORAN AND SAKURA GOT MARRIED *SQUEE* I'VE ALWAYS SHIPPED THEM
I KNEW IT
BWAHAHAHA

Ahem...anyways...now, suddenly, John and Jones are going to...somewhere. Now I must figure out where. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh yeah, and underwear vending machines. Heh heh what. XD Love it.

SYAORAN AND SAKURA ARE GETTING MARRIED! *EXCITED*

And "Tipsy Performer". That's fantastic.

And this guys I know nothing about but will learn about along the way with special powers. Wait, what? Confused, but excited nonetheless. :3 *STILL EXCITED*
Off to the first chapter!