Reviews for Time Traveler |
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![]() ![]() Awesome story! And was the J Hope in the author's note on purpose or was it accidental? :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey did little Annabeth go to Tarturus? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! Bunny would u like some ice for that burn? I love this and can't wait to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Different. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What Bunny said was uncalled for. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bunny needs to calm down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story plz update as soon as you have time :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're not the only one who loves this chapter! Whoa. Intense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() more please |
![]() ![]() Hi I'm Amanda. And I love your book. I think your more than capable. Your still a little rough around the edges, but that's nothing a little practice won't fix. If you include more detail, and maybe read through each chapter to add to the greatness of it. You could be a more than stunning author. And for one of your first story's, it's stellar. You have so much potential. You could even put Susan Collins to shame one day. Please don't give up. And don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews. Just give everyone a chance to notice you, and how amazing you are. I would hate to see such talent go to waste. Keep dreaming. And try your best if you take all my advice into account, you'll be amazing. Just try a little harder. I know you'll get there. |
![]() ![]() tu as tort ! |