Wow, by far this is my favorite GAoBaM fanfiction, including the others. The dialogue feels so genuine, I literally could picture and hear the characters say their lines, and not to mention the relationships built with all the characters are perfect and most I didn't expect to work the way they did. My favorite parts by far, Jack and Malaria's dynamic (which if you ever revisit this series I hope we see more of these two.), Nergal and his relationship with his family especially with Aunt Sis seeing as how most people treat it as though it was abusive? That's a very annoying trait I see most commonly through stories involving Nergal so I'm really glad to find a story where they're just so caring of each other even despite the complications such as seen in the first part they manage to work it out and still be a happy family, I was also a big softy for the parental sides of some of the characters especially Skarr and Atrocia, it was also really great to see Mandy fail (not in a masochist way haha) it's really refreshing to find one where it doesn't always work out for her compared to how the fanbase sees her as this perfect being without any flaws so to see her ideas not work out and even get called on for was really nice~ The only parts that really bothered me were the fight scenes, I didn't really care as much maybe I was just too caught on the relationships but so far that's my only complaint. I hope maybe one day if you ever feel like it, you could revisit Beyond Grim and Evil, I think it would be amazing to see this story finished and get more of what I loved about the originals, and even if not this was still a very satisfying read and thank you so much for making this. Have a great day and again thank you for this fanfic!

I read the other three stories from this story as well and have to say that they are all excellent. I like the past you invented for Jack. I have also observed that you have put the characters in the show to good use, none of the main characters appear to be OC.

In the future I would kind of like to see Mandy take on that immortal worm form. I'm not a particular fan of the futures that other authors have portrayed for the characters of 'Grim and evil'.

*phew!* They're ok! And things appear to have gotten back to the way they were...

It's fine, just glad to see they're ok.

Aw man, that's messed up... Poor Junior, Dora, Mindy and Sperg.

Aw man thing's are looking dark...

*sniffle* This chapter really tugged at my heartstrings. Parental love is genuine -even if some the characters refuse to admit/acknowledge it.

*Sighs* It's for the best, they want them safe.

They gotta hold out a little more until they find the ingredients.

Dang, things just got from bad to worse...

Well that was a risky thing for Jack to do, although he does bring up a good point regarding the effects.
Oh nuts! In order for the cure to be complete, they need to find the ingredients that are in the main land!

It is pretty cool that they're working together despite a few differences, tension and problems they have...

Interesting chapter seeing more interaction and working together on a cure but even so they still need to go back to the mainland. And very soon it'll be decisive for all of them.

Mmm, sweet heartwarming moments between the kids when they're napping and the older characters.

And wow, the courage team didn't see that coming. Same with Malaria - and in some small degree Jack- feeling parental towards Rick.

Alright! They found the other group and kids are together with their loved ones, time to head for the boathouse.

Now all that's left is to find or make a cure, I mean if the potion was made there has to be an antidote.

Oh good, they're getting together now they just need to run to the assigned place and meet up with Creeper and Nergal jr's group.

*Sighs in relief* They're alright.

Yeah, I agree where is Jack? He better watch himself out there. Hopefully he might find the uninfected ones.

As much as it's agravating and the tension between some of the characters, but considering the disaster that's going on, they all will have to call a truce, and I mean everyone, the Immortal, Undertakers, and everyone else at least until the zombie fiasco is over...

But first they gotta run into eachother or find a place where they can all meet.