Aw no, I'm sad to see this bring discontinued, and its understandable, but I just wanted to say that it was a great start and it was very well-written! (which is, quite rare sometimesthe characters and reactions were in character, though it was a bit confusing with the different time lines and so. Anyways, good luck with your future endeavors!

PLEASE UPDATE THIS AGAIN PLEASE

but Ed actually is Envy's little half brother from another mother

(for chap 2)You aren't the Coronal Ed FMA already has a pyromaniac

Riza is the true hero of FMA I mean she has to put up with all of the alchemists and normal soldiers bs

"I LIKE 'AN WITH GLASSES AND ANGST, SUE ME." Is probably the best line I've ever read in relation to Hoenheim

Awesome? No Ed you were an amazingly badass sass-lord of a kid

I think that the sparkling is contained to just Armstrong(for now anyway)

did anyone ever adopt this story?

Actually, dear person who reported this, this is in no way illegal since:
1. It's not the original transcript
2. It falls under fair use
3. If it were illegal so would the whole fanfiction site since it uses the characters of another work

So go fuck yourself.

Interesting chapter and plot idea

to the person that reported this fic, fuck you

You know this is illegal right? While you thankfully stopped while you're ahead, it still violates copyright law (which is a crime) by copying one of the episodes. Not only is it illegal, but a violation of this sites rules which forbids copying of copyright protected works and MST.

This story has been reported.

Was the joke about Ed being Envy's little brother a sort of 2003 reference?

this is a great fic and your a good author but seriously fuck you