This is really great! Are you ever gonna update?

is chapter 3 coming soon ?

Aww, only two chapters? This story sounded really good, and showed lots of promise. I enjoyed the two chapters you completed, and would like so more, please! I hope you haven't given up entirely on it. Your grammar was good, and you have a nicely descriptive way of writing, so I was really looking forward to reading more, even though I knew it wasn't finished when I decided to try it.

If you have given up on it, you ought to put it up for adoption. Did you have any future chapters planned out, or know what you were going to do with the rest of the story?

O.O Must read more... Plz update soon!

seemes interesting. Please continue, i want to know whats going to happen.

update