Reviews for A Mess of Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this. Still waiting for that next chapter? |
![]() ![]() The story is not complete. Too bad, because it set out as an entrancing tale. |
![]() ![]() Very cute... needs an ending though. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please add some more! So romantic and delicious! I want a handsome Goblin King too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought the dialogue was really well written! It does feel a little unresolved so I hope there's another chapter or two. |
![]() ![]() Lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Jareth's "Oh, can't we just have a moment?" I could hear David Bowie's voice saying that with a pinch of whining! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you ever read a book, turned to the next chapter and then realized that was the end. That's what just happened. There was no clear end. You should definitely add a chapter or two and actually finish it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved reading theis |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE it! Do keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was delicious. Please add if you can! |
![]() ![]() This was really good! I hope to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Urg this is so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very likeable. It needs more please. Keep smiling. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! Please update! |