please that was so cute

esto fue mejor que el comic 3

Wow great job you really nailed the characterizations for both Johnny and Sonya wonderfully.

Wow that one threw me for a few loops, from Cage wanting to brake up, to Sonya telling Cage she's going have a baby, to him pulling the drama act.

This story was one surprise after anther, I rarely see fics do that now.

So keep it up right a part 2 to this story or something else like it you've got awesome writing skills use em their great!

If you want ideas up about writing something like this again, how bout Sonya choosing between Cage and her first boyfriend this same dude also is the one that made her must trust people so much after he hurt her. That was just random idea that got from reading this story.

Great fic.

Create another J/S fanfiction!:D

Most J/S fanfics suck.

This is the only J/S fanfic I've appreciated.

VERY MUCH.

:D

Awesome

Thats was soo emotional!

unbeliuvably emotional...could ya make another 1...?

Well, I have to admit, I'm impressed. You did a very good job. Most Johnny and Sonya stories suck. But this was great! I ejoyed it very much. You should be really proud.

I really loved how this was set in a more realistic envoirment. Also, the conversations they had were extremely deep and interesting. I hope you continue writing these kinds of stories, because we need them.

Beautiful, just beautiful.

I've seen this on Tara Jo's site, and I love it still. You are a great J/S writer! Looking forward to more romance in the future!

Kid Cage

Great! Johny and sonya well done for once! (the paring) Both stayed in character. I like the beginning the best the way you have johnys thought procces is written well. Great story keep writing!

you are really, really, good.

BTW, vote Scorpion!

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He doesn't deserve to lose to fairy boy.

Wow. I must admit that I'm more Rayden/Sonya, but this is awesome! Hurry up and write more stories!

Always great usual Indy! I will miss your new stories when you are gone!If I stop be lazy I just might actually sit down and write something of my own (Yeah right ;).

But I enjoyed this story very much. It shows both at a different level in their relationship, maturity even, not just spouting off snide comments like normal. Again, good work.