You integrated their dialogue from canon into this AU well.

Would love to read this again!

AHHHHH I LOVED IT. can't remember who recommended this on tumblr but thank goodness they did! absolutely perfect, nailed their characters and I adore how you seamlessly worked in the quotes ahh gave me all the feels and nostalgia and now I am so ready for season 3 thank you!

Is the writer 14?

This is wonderfully written. Truly a quality Artemis/Wally piece.

I feel like I re-read this story every few months and get the same amount of enjoyment every single time. Just want you to know that this fic brings me so much joy. The kids are so in-character and the development is so well paced. I love this fic so much

This is such a great story! I can't believe you wrote and published it so quickly. It's not too long, not too short. And you do great descriptions! Original but realistic. I could see everything in my head! Do you draw? You seen to have a great eye for detail. Good call on not making the story too heavy. It still had its 'angsty' moments but nothing overtly so. Great balance. Loved Perdita's cameo and Zantana was awesome! Would love to read a Chalant story by you :). Oh and the humour was excellent. Like Wally's texts. But I'm still in awe over your visual cues! Like Artemis' expressions and all the sensations Wally feels like the coolness after the fire in this chapter. Great stuff. Don't stop writing!

Loved your story! I can't get enough of these two :)

"I'm one of a kind," she scoffs haughtily xD One of a Kind By GD. Maybe you didn't mean that with it but still THUMBS UP!

YESSSSS ME BEAUTIFUL SHIP IS BEAUTIFUL! :3 luvluvluvit :D

This fic is amazing! I love, love, love it! :D

AH! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! You are a really talented writer! I didn't find any mistakes in it at all! It was perfect! Wonderful! Glorious! You captured all of the characters really well! Congratulations! You are now my favorite story writer!

This story is so adorable and well-thought out and in character that I almost threw up in anticipation at the start of some chapters.
...whoa okay, not what I meant. Do you ever get so excited you almost puke? If not, then I apologize, because that's what I meant.
Such a good AU, such a good spitfire story, and just in general, a great read. :)

This is easily of of my favourite YJ fics. So amazing!

Liked the first 3 things that came to his mind

Loved it