| Reviews for Third Time's the Charm |
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   sondrex76 chapter 3 . 9/15/2018 Nice short fanfic. I found a couple of potential(well 3) grammar errors: 1 "allow his shock or suspicion show," - "allow his shock or suspicion to show," 2 "sleep in the Harry's presence" - "sleep in Harry's presence" "smiles at little boy," - "smiles at a little boy," Thanks for writing and have a nice day! |
| Sylphrena33 chapter 3 . 4/24/2018 This is a little confusing, but I like it. An epilogue would be good, although this ending works well. I like this. :) |
| Innieminnie chapter 3 . 1/18/2016 soo...hope the epilogue is in Harry's pov |
| chocovic-chu chapter 3 . 8/20/2014 Unexpected? Well, this reader expected something clear. Confusing? Of course; even this reader didn't know what part was that confusing. . . . So, this was a story in which the Master of Death had tasted Bruce's suicidal tendency, came stalking to observe (or to help?) but felt it's useless(?), gave Bruce a chance . . . then went away, but came once more when Bruce did it again? Or was the Grim Reaper actually stalking the Hulk? Thanks for sharing, though. |
| blackbloodywolf chapter 3 . 11/5/2013 more? |
| Lw117149 chapter 3 . 10/23/2013 nice I loved this |
| moonyrocks13 chapter 3 . 7/13/2013 do you know where i can find the pic you used for this story? |
| domsijohn chapter 3 . 6/17/2013 i wanted harry and bruce as mates |
| domsijohn chapter 2 . 6/17/2013 so hope they find a home |
| domsijohn chapter 1 . 6/17/2013 love harry |
| Yodes chapter 3 . 3/28/2013 Liked this. Interested in seeing more. |
| creativesm75 chapter 3 . 3/23/2013 interesting strange ending. i don't get it? |
| yaoilover1992-2010 chapter 3 . 3/17/2013 if you were to end this story like that it would be okay because i have no idea how your going to continue this. |
| Angelfabeth chapter 3 . 2/23/2013 This is really good! A bit confusing but I still enjoyed reading this :) |
| Banner'sLove chapter 3 . 2/11/2013 hi, i thought the grammar was excellent! it's so nice to find someone who knows how to write :) anyways i found this story rather confusing, and i was rather afraid of harry. i'm not sure that his character was portrayed the right way. but all in all this story has left me feeling haunted |
