This is so great...I need the third chapter.

I LOVE it so much...

Well, for a moment there, I too forgot what exactly does Shinobu do for a living... and yes - here poor Miyagi... but what did he expect? He was told about it, but I guess he kind of liked his fantasy world a bit too much and started to forget about reality and he was fooled with Shinobu's cute little angel face... oh well.

But what did you plan for final chapter? I thought this was finished when I started reading but now I see that there's no more... and it has been a long time... I guess it's pretty safe to assume that this is abandoned... that's too bad cuz even though this is dark I was wondering how it would finish. I think that realistic would be that they don't have a future together... or he can help him get out of it if Shi-chin wants... but I just can't see them together after everything... it's kind of gross... at least for me after that 6-some...ughhhh...well you're surprisingly good at writing these dark themes. Too bad you haven't updated in a while as I said I was curious how it'll end... hope you come back some day. All the Best!

Whoa, hm this is pretty dark but I don't mind all that much, you're good writer...yes your style here is different from what I'm used to and you managed to describe well the state of the city and Miyagi's mind and I understood him on some level but it's hard not to hate him after this last event... how could he throw him out just like that he was better of not offering him a place to stay at all then like this...I'll try not to hate Miyagi here but it's really hard... really hard.
And in anime/manga he is my abs favorite character...
But don't take me the wrong way all of this doesn't change the fact that you're good writer it's just that kind of story, I read your story Bodyguard which is quite different and lighter, but I think that this one is better - it draws more emotions ... I'm curious about second chapter... which I'll read now. :-)

I thought this chapter had its cute moments. Enjoyed Miyagi's whole Shinobu is cute thoughts. Did not care for the sixsome... and felt terrible for poor Miyagi. I look forward to the next chapter.

I found this quite entertaining, if a bit... well it was different. I sort of like it, but I'm rather mad at Miyagi for kicking him out. He needs a swift kick in the... I'll let you guess where. But otherwise, very good writing and it kept me intrigued. Now, onto the next chapter.

Oh dear Jesus.

You are like, God, to me right now. But a god that I actually believe in. XD

You portrayed them pretty damn well. I can definitely see Shinobu sellijnhimself like that. All of this I could see happening somehow. It was long, but I read it. It took me like, an hour Inthink? And now it's almost six in the morning, on American Independence Day and I'm supposed to leave in like, two minutes to go toa family gathering. And I'm reading gay porn. That is how good this was.

But a few things hugged me. Not huge major things, just, Shunobu is nineteen. Even if this took place in like, the states, or somewhere ose because Inthink other countries have the legal age lower than nineteen butninforget which ones, Shinobu would be legal. And if this took place in Jalan, the age for sexual consent is thirteen, so...yeah. Miyahi being so freaked of by his age was what bugged me. XD

But this was amazing. I admire you, so, so much.

And on a side note; this allowed me to realize how amazing a prostitute one of my own original characters would make, due to his similarities to Shinobu in this story. So I thank you for that, and my new inspiration.

I dunno how to end this. Uh...live long and prosper.

Priest

Haha boring? That's was so intense! Poor Miyagi, I can't believe Shinobu, I know it's his job, but still! I do enjoy the fact that you have us more information about why Shinobu does what he does. It sad, but it had to be done. Thank you for the story I can't wait for your next update.

holy crap you need to finish this seriously jeez. it is so good. i really, really want to see how this turns out, please I hope you haven't given up on this story it's really good and i just want shinobu to be cute all the time and i want him to quit his job and live a happily ever after with Misagi please i need this in my life O.O

Can't wait for more as always...waiting as patiently as I possibly can

Amazing chapter, just like the last one! I love the detail put into Miyagi and Shinobu's interactions. You can tell they're in love just by the style of writing and that's really amazing. Not only that, but they're just so human in your story. Neither of them are perfect lovers and everything about them can seem wrong one moment and right the next. It really makes me curious to see what happens next as you're just so unpredictable.

Thanks for the read and good luck writing!
CupidKirby

This story...is amazing! I'm impressed by how much life you're giving this city Miyagi's forced to live in. You really go all the way for describing just how indecent and crude everything is that I feel like I'm there myself. Great job! Miyagi himself is a bit heartless. Not just the snowstorm part but leaving a high Shinobu on the streets without feeding him. I don't think he's that cruel. Especially considering in the manga Shinobu feel for Miyagi because he saved him from a gang.

Cupidkirby

omg wow this chapter got me off my seat...especially the last paragraph. im soo anxious for more.

MORE! Please let Miyagi have Shinobu and smut him senseless! :P

OMG, when I saw this update, my heart literally flew somewhere. XD Was this 16K?! :O You are amazing! :D
I love Miyagi's sarcastic p.o.v. in his mind! I like his character that you've made - how he secretly can't stay away from Shinobu and how attracted he is towards him. - Oh, goodness, I love this sentence: Shinobu was beaten down to a hospitalized state then kidnapped when released until he was arrested along with his kidnapper and died in prison as all those thugs proceeded to rape his dead body... - best combo story ever! XD Miyagi's so pessimistic!
AHHHHHH - Why, Shinobu?! I think you just broke my heart right there when Miyagi found Shinobu in that orgy. :'( Like shattered my heart, more-like. I feel so sad for Miyagi this time! (Last chapter I felt this sad for Shinobu) I loved how the story progressed and I like where this is all going, but man, I felt such a betrayal from Shinobu... then again, Miyagi's eyes just shut that world away from the readers as well, so I shouldn't be so judgmental against the blonde - I just hoped that maybe since he's clearly fallen in love with Miyagi that he'd stop doing that - but it's his job, I know, so that sucks. :/ Looking forward to the next chapter - Thanks for this awesome chapter! I might be re-reading this. XD