Omg this was amazing too!

...seriously? Meth?...

Loved the angst!

This doc is amazing! I look how you didn't fix everything that was going on but left it with a little improvement. I love how you wrote Ollie's and Thea's relationship, thank you!

loved the character study! great job!

So glad he is ok now and can get hugs and not be stiff like that anymore.

Oh! This is good. I remenber that time of Ollie and Thea. You should writte mote about them. I love them!

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this is great, not too many authors have actually explored the impact Oliver returning would have on Thea.

I always thought Oliver seemed a little too adjusted when he came back. I figured there would have been a lot more of these moments where he forgets where he is. Great fic! Thank you for posting!

wow amazing! please write more arrow fics!

Loved how you portrayed Oliver's confusion and Thea's reaction:)

I enjoyed reading this very much Oliver and his Mother seem truly broken but Thea may be just somewhat cracked around the edges could there be help for her?

I've been waiting for more of your work! This piece and "The Bridge" show your style, and skill as a writer. I like how you leave things unstated, or at least, understated. Thea is not portrayed as "all seeing" - she doesn't notice everything - which makes her more real. The final line leaves questions: tonight, but what of tomorrow? Is she closing the drawer metaphorically or had she opened it at some point and been reviewing the evening? These are the kinds of questions and observations that elevate the writing. This piece deserves more reviews but as the fan base catches on I hope you will get more comments. I will check back here more often now! Thank you.

Really enjoy where you are going with these stories, I think you are showing Ollies struggle really well!