will naruto get all the levels of the kioigan ?

dude, i got to chapter 30 so far, but holy shit, this is just getting worse and worse, from the start its super overdramatic(like a fucking 12 year old girl), and the fights, not only are they inconsistent as fuck(characters level of strength is literally random), they play out more like dragon ball z, which is retarded. this novel had potential(sort of, new dojutsu novels are always limited, cause its unoriginal as fuck, thats disregarding the fact taht, this naruto doesn't even have a fucking dojutsu. this is like if the nara clan, everytime they used tehyre shadows theyre eyes turned black, its purely cosmetic, not functional, so its not a dojutsu, casue his eyes dont do anything.) but it starting going to shit as soon as any fighting started. characters personalities change randomely, entire paragraphs of conversations happen during battles(when the characters themselves would have bled out before teh third fucking sentence). honestly, this just turned out to be a dissapointment. your hellfire reforged novel ahs the same problems, honestly, its like everything you write is really just dragonball renamed, written by a 6 year old who has no idea how anything hes writing works. good luck, but yeah, you suck at this, go to school for writing or something, or think about how a fight actually works, theyre shinobi, not samurai, or martial artists, this isnt dragonball, this is naruto, bleeding out is a thing here.

You're introducing stuff too quickly and throwing new guys at us so fast...dude, he hasn't even stopped the scroll from being stolen. Stop doing that. And your building the story around his kioigan thingy, which is going to detract from the rest of the story if you don't shove it to the side, which in turn defeats the pointing of giving him a doujutsu at all.

Your audience should never feel the need to say "WTF is going on?"

And at this moment, Mizuki the Bastard realized he done fucked up.

So did you nerf shadow clones majorly or is Naruto just an idiot?
Because making clones and then whispering them to tell them the plan . . . Doesn't make sense. His clones know everything he does, if he makes clones they already know the plan.

Didn't check to make sure his opponent was actually out of the fight.
Idiot.

Middle Aged? You do realise that Minato and Kushina died in their 20s. Also, you're really overdoing it with the Japanese words. Would it kill you to use "Shadow clone" instead of "Kage Bunshin"?

Update

...That makes no sense. He could make more clones and Mizuki wasn't this formidable. Not to mention the fact you had a giant fucking light show. Why would only Iruka and Anko see it? Not to mention, Anko didn't go either.

good story to bad havent been any updates in while

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With how she talked about modes I thought he'd have them all.

I find this kind of dumb

Nah this is too bullshitty for me

Great job

So is this fic abandoned? I really hope not, I was really enjoying it. I'm aware that there's the other Reaper's Mix (in fact I'm reading that one too), I just want them both to continue. I understand if you don't wish to continue this one though