| Reviews for Bits and Pieces |
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   Selkiesong22 chapter 1 . 2/8 I just love this story. It’s not often I add a story to my favorites, but this one is so good! I wish there were more about Jack not being able to eat. |
| Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 12/23/2019 I've got no other words left in me to describe this piece after reading it... except PERFECT! Please keep up the awesome job, friend! This fic is beyond brilliant! |
| laelruin chapter 1 . 12/23/2019 Makes my heart hurt and sing. (T~T) Very nice story. :) L |
| Demi clayton chapter 1 . 12/8/2019 I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you. |
| Phoenix-Inferno18 chapter 1 . 11/28/2019 This is the perfect balance of angsty and heartwarming, I loved it. This was so well written, it’s just amazing. |
| Kuro Jamm chapter 1 . 7/29/2019 Soo sad and so beautiful...! TvT Thanks for sharing your story with us, it was a crazy ride, poor Jacky ÇvÇ |
| Whovianeverlark17 chapter 1 . 3/25/2019 I love it! |
| North of the North chapter 1 . 12/29/2018 Awwww, that was so sweet. |
| Not a Pineapple chapter 1 . 11/25/2018 Its been years since I last read this but it still makes me cry. I love that you guided us readers through the story with Sandy’s perspective, because I probably wouldn’t have noticed much without the sentences about what he knows. Also realized that since each Guardian had their own separate experiences with Jack and food, they wouldn’t realize anything’s wrong because, in their eyes, it’s just a one time thing and they don’t share their incident with the other guardians. It isn’t until Sandy notices Jack’s dreams (which shift from childlike dreams to just any food he can dream of) that a problem is recognized and addressed. Thank you for the lovely read. |
| XYZArtemis chapter 1 . 11/21/2018 Lovely job! |
| Blue September chapter 1 . 8/19/2018 This really made me cry. Love it |
| marketeerbubbles chapter 1 . 6/15/2018 This is a really good story :) |
| Mystic Fairy Tame chapter 1 . 6/4/2018 Ow. Jeeze how long until someone other then Sandy would have noticed? I'm thinking North or Tooth next but- jeeze poor Jack. |
| Zander L. Jones chapter 1 . 12/8/2017 Um just so you know this is magnificent and I have already reread like 3x in a one day period! I absolutely adore hoe you took the story! I love how Sandy could pick up on more and how accurately and perfectly you portrayed 2 sides of a conversation being perceived even if its onnone topic! I will read anything you right! I love how jack is so defensive over his eating habits ah! |
| X chapter 1 . 8/20/2017 The resolution at the end was great and loved how Sandy brought the issue to the attention of the others. The shifting PoVs in the beginning was an effective way to display the problem before bringing it to the ending. Fantastic! |
