Wow...Just wow. That is absolutely beautiful.

Ahh this chapter is even better than the first!
But, you switch between present and past a lot... I don't mean to be rude, just informing you... I know when I write I don't particularly notice that... Anyway :)
Please update soon

This is very good, you're an excellent writer and the whole thing flows, but I do have one critique (sorry :( ) correct me if I'm wrong, but you said Valora was of Latin descent? So I assume she spoke Spanish... And Heaven in Spanish is Cielo... Not Celio... It's a very minor detail but it bothered me a bit. Other than that, I'm hooked to the story!

Amazing I love the back story for Jack :D
can't wate for the next update :)

this was such a great chapter! i was so excited to see the update, and i cant wait to read the next chapter, whenever you have the chance to write and post it of course

im sensing artemis is going to have a pretty significant role (what with apollo and athena hanging out together, maja acting on orders from her, her recieving the message from the moon, and her being goddess of the moon and wild animals...), shes easily my fav goddess and i cant wait to see what you have in store for her- i really hope shel appear in the next chapt!

Great story hope Val ended up like Jake