OMG, this chapter was great! Can't wait for chapter 12...
Thank you for updating!

Love the story so far!

Update, update, update,,, please.. PLEASE...

This is really good,,.
please update soon...

OMG you leave it like that,,,,

I can't wait to read the rest of this!

Wow, can't believe you stopped it at such a good part. I always look forward to seeing a new chapter from this story. Please update soon.

Wow, what ever Dragaunus did it's effecting Nosedive big time. It seems like he was meant to feel like he's dying. Man update this, I want to read more.

First of all, congratulations on graduating and marriage! No wonder you haven't updated for awhile, things have been really happening for you!

I'm sorry it has taken so long for me to do a review on this story (actually reviewing all together has been eluding me) but I'm in the final year of my study so it's hard to find the time, as I'm sure you can relate.

I am still in love with this story as when it first began. It has a real sad, melancholy ring to it that is quite heart-wrenching but the story is too addicting to stop. I'm loving you writing from Nosedive's perspective, which you seem to have an awesome knack for. The voice you use is incredibly natural and real, it truly fees like he is speaking. You do a great job exploring the team's reaction to what has happened. And while I say the story can be very sad, the droll sarcasm you use for Nosedive's voice gives many rays of lightness, giving a great balance there.

Also, no problem as well, but don't be shame about some spelling mistakes, it happens to all writers, sometimes, no matter how many times we edit and edit! There was only one spelling mistake I spotted this time and that was in the sentence of, 'Every time someone mentioned them by name, he gritted his teeth and his eyes wen dark'. Obviously you meant 'went dark' but just thought I'd point it out. Trust me, no biggie. I've made that many corrections of typos in just this review, it is unbelievable!

Brilliant job on your new update and hopefully, I will be reviewing your next chapter fairly soon!

Still loving this story :D.

Cheers,

MD

Wow, that was good and intese. Nosedive is starting to remember the sleep deprivation he recieved. The goal buzzer must of triggered it. Update soon I really want to read more.

It's good seeing this story updated after so long. It's good to see Nosedive fetting somewhat better, but that doesn't mean he's out of the woods yet. Update soon.

please update I can't wait to read more :)

Love your new update as always. I do disagree though with Kikino in that I definately find it realistic. People can have one incident happen to them that lasts one minute and they can be greatly affected by it for the rest of their lives. No offence intended, Kikino. It's your opinion so that's cool. :) I do agree with you hoping for some brotherly love the next chapter, I'm a sucker for it lol.

I do love your style of writing, your growing suspense is brilliant. Can't wait for your next update.

Also too, I just thought I'd tell you that it's Tanya as well rather than Tonya, even though they do tend to pronounce it that way in the show.

Love it as always.

Cheers,

The Mighty Duck

Wow this is intense. What the heck happened to Nosedive? Whatever it is it must of been apart of Dragaunus's plan. Please update soon, I want to know what happens next.

Wow, that got a lot darker than I expected. I understand that Nosedive went through a lot, be he was only capture for, a week(?). Though it's enough to have some effect on his mind, especially with the head injury, I do feel like this is a bit dramatic. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy it, but it's hard to grasp on a reality basis. However, this is a fic about space aliens who fight crime and play hockey so I don't have much of an argument on "reality."
Hopefully, we'll get to see some brotherly love next chapter?

Can't wait to read more. Thank you for writing this,
Kikino