Ahhh that was really touching, I just about felt his despair as my own...
Some really fancy words there, and colorful or interesting metaphors and descriptions!

Poor Kurama. I love this, it is so good :')

Poor Kurama :'( so sad, so good :')

Wonderful. There is so much emotion in such a small piece.
Hope there will be a second part as you said altough it's already very good as it is.

Great stuff! I'm very enraptured with your writing style, and I love love love what you do with your characters. Keep it up!