| Reviews for Half Life |
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professionalemail101 chapter 3 . 2/5/2015 HAWKEYE NEEDS SOMEONE TO TREASURE HIS SMART ALRC TENDENCIES TOO! CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE AN OC FOR HAWKEYE BECAUSE THE WAY YOU WRITE HIM OUT IS REALLY GOOD AND YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING AND YEAH |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2014 Next chapter soon pleasssseee! :) |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/20/2014 Your story is amazing! It's well written and not rushed. I hope you continue soon so I can read more of this awesome story! |
Silawatsi chapter 3 . 3/11/2013 You write the characters so well! I hope to read more soon, but don't rush. Your pacing on this thing is makes what is happening convincing, and a delight to read. |
Silawatsi chapter 2 . 3/11/2013 The way you handle information flow from a POV is beautiful. It leaves me eager for answers that have tactfully held back. And that will keep me coming back. I LOVE IT. |
Silawatsi chapter 1 . 3/11/2013 ermegerd this is suspensful, thrilling, and so well written... and the first chapter! You've gotten a strong start on this fic, I MUST READ IT ALL. |
Lonesome Courier chapter 3 . 2/24/2013 Forgot to say this last chapter, but I don't think Nick Fury would've communicated through a cell phone. He probably has some kind of ear piece or other communication device. He's more professional than that. You also need to put commas when someone continues speaking. Other than that, I don't think I found any errors. Kind of curious to know why she's so dangerous, or at least why S.H.I.E.L.D seems to think so. I also have a question. How do you plan on making Cap and Miss Rumor fall in love? |
Lonesome Courier chapter 2 . 2/24/2013 First of all wanted to say another intersting chapter. I knew she was a super soldier just by the summary, which I know sounds kind of dumb. You had some spelling and grammar mistakes here as well. For example, when a person continues talking, there should be a comma. "On the day I met you, you told me I could trust you…when it counts," the Captain said quietly, "I think you're a man who cares about his country. |
Lonesome Courier chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 Definitely an interesting chapter! And a super soldier! Honestly, you're not the first person to do this but I would still like to see where the story goes. You also had a few grammar mistakes but nothing major. |
eb chapter 2 . 2/18/2013 I like this :D I'm very curious to keep reading and you do a nice job of hinting at backstory without info dumping. I wonder if the story would be stronger if chapter 2 was made into the first chapter. Imho I think it would be more interesting that way. |
Lady Zyphyr chapter 3 . 2/7/2013 This has most certainly grabbed my interest Especially for Miss Rumor's background. Would love to read another chapter :) |
saltycat chapter 3 . 2/3/2013 Next chapter, please! |
Nomannic chapter 3 . 1/24/2013 A fabulous job, as always :) The consistency in the quality of your writing is impressive. I look forward to the next update, but take your time. It's so totally worth the wait. I'm really excited to find out what will happen next. You've set up a very convincing OC, and a lot of mystery. |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2013 Loved it! Keep going ! Loved your OC! |
Nomannic chapter 2 . 1/7/2013 Wow! Even better than the first chapter. A lot of stories drop off in quality after the first chapter, so once again, you have impressed me :) Don't worry about the length of chapters - it's a bit of an fad. Quality matters more than anything else, so take your time, upload whatever the heck word count you want when you want, and enjoy. :) I'm so excited for the next chapter! You had me checking my email every day for an update .; I'm glad you decided to write this after all, because it's one of the most well-done Avengers fanfictions I've read (let alone one that has an OC). You are a ridiculously talented writer, and I applaud you. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. :) |