This is so good and I can't wait for another update! I think the chapter lengths are fine and your chapters definitely aren't lame. I'm hoping you haven't abandoned this story because I'm loving it.

what about Fabian and Viktor Krum

Update! I'm starting to think that you are ignoring the story!

It was not! Update!

Wait how does that work? In the first chapter he had just come back from hogwarts, the second chapter he is 6?

When you time, can you please update?

As this story is old and choices already made. First Fabian should be with a girl not a boy. As for who Daphne Greengrass or her sister. The Weasley all of them except may be the twins should act like they do to all Malfoys nasty. All Ron wants is the money Fabian had as Harry Potter, why else would they need him loyal to him.

I think it would be interesting to see Fabian/Harry pair with Luna or Susan Bones.

Hello
Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't abandon

He should be with Daphne Greengrass. For sure not a Weasley.

I hope the DMLE works with Scotland Yard To send all of the Dursleys to prison and I mean all of them. Petunia Dursley nee Evens. And Dudley, Marge and Vernon Dursley. And that Drastic Reforms are made when it comes to Child Protective Services and that Dumbledore too is also sent to prison along with losing all of his Positions For placing Harry in an abusive home. And not listening When Minerva Warned him about the Dursleys from her observation of them and maybe taking into account what James and Lily may have told her about the Dursleys.

No sex

Your chapters aren't too short or lame. Your writing is perfectly fine and I have had a blast reading it. If you add more I will be more than happy to continue reading.
Many fortunes,
-Grimnarin

great chapter update soon

I can't wait to see what everyone will be like when they find out Harry is a Malfoy.