I love this story so far. I really hope you get a chance to finish it:)

Is that
A motherfucking
DEXTER REFERENCE?!

Aw...THIS WAS ADORABLE! I'M LITERALLY CRYING RIGHT NOW! Well, I would be, if I wasn't the literal personification of the phrase "No more tears, well's run dry." As it is, this was GODDAMN ADORABLE! GODDAMMIT MAN! THIS RIGHT HERE MAN! This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I'M NOT WORTHY! Well, considering everything that I've done in my life, I actually AM worthy, but the sentiment still remains. THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! This makes me incredibly proud of the author of this fic.

Sirius had BETTER repay Arnold. You know what would be fun? If Arnold was actually a glamoured 'Mad-Eye' Moody, just pretending to live as a Muggle, because he was pissed off at the wizarding world for not giving Sirius Black a trial, which means that they could have put an innocent in Azkaban. After all, his motto is "Constant Vigilance!" which means that if any wizard would have been pissed that the wizarding world didn't give Sirius a proper trial, while letting other known Death Eaters walk free, it would have been Alastor Moody.

NO! Sirius, NO! You could have stayed until the man died of old age! NO SIRIUS, WHY DID YOU EVEN LEARN HIS NAME BEFORE YOU LEFT HIM LIKE THAT?!

at the mention of exploding snap i just have to voice my thoughts that are spooking in my head for a while on this game. in german it was translated 'snape explodiert' which in english would be exploding snape, obviously meaning severus snape. i really love the german name just because its funny and im really praying for the day i read an english fanfiction with exploding snape

Amazing Amazing Story...
Loved it...
Please Continue Soon...

A good story, but quite hard to read.

Would be good story if you deleted 80% of it. Most paragraphs there don't bring anything to story so I give up here as there was no decent plot so far.

Misuse of "compensate" where "commiserate" is intended.

It does not help the flow of your story to stop in the middle of a fight and give the background on each of the combatants. You do the same thing with POV thoughts and that's annoying too, especially when it gets redundant. Too many words, sentences, even paragraphs, weakens your story, not strengthens it.

"cruciatus", not "crucatious".

Only two current Order members are Aurors: Tonks and Shacklebolt. The others are not. In particular, Snape is not.

Snape is a bad man. He may have had a falling out with Voldemort so that now he's loyal to Dumbledore, but he's still a vile man who does reprehensible things to vulnerable students and others. He does more to singlehandedly undermine wizarding society than any other person besides Voldemort. He's gatekeeper for all jobs that require potions OWLs and NEWTs, which includes Aurors and healers. He also undermines the discipline at the premiere school in the UK and promotes division between the houses and in society.

"Lucy!... you've got some 'splaning to do." There's no reason at all why a Horcrux would hold another person's soul in "limbo", even if the "Dark magic" was transferred to that person. At best Reg would receive a soul fragment from Voldemort in addition to his own soul... a soul fragment that would hold only Voldemort to this plane, not some other person. And of course a soul in limbo still is a step away from living on earth again. You also need to explain where Reg has been all this time. It's been years since he died. And you also haven't explained how there was a "transference" of Dark magic to start with. Last, but by no means least, Reg talks of "the locket" as though Sirius already knows about it, but he doesn't.

You seem to be introducing characters left and right just to have them around, not to advance the plot. Even Remus isn't doing anything constructive at this point. They shouldn't be there if they're just going to sit around on their duffs and not do anything to help Sirius or Harry or be villains.

You could have warned us in the summary that the insufferable know it all was a major character/love interest. Her hair is brown, not blonde. What are the chances that a girl who lives in Oxford would be playing at a London play park? It's a cliche that doesn't work.

Why would a daughter want to be called by her mother's name? And why would Tonks be working in a beach hotel? She's only 11 or so. And why would she think she could boss Sirius around?

Sirius did go to the Potter's cottage and look for Harry. But Hagrid got there first and refused to give him up. Only then did he go looking for Peter.

i knew it! i knew they were connected! woohoo! i was right! well not intirely but he was like that with magic instead if being some entirely magical being (he did seam ethereal).

lord black is a some form of sirius's magic acting out too help him, right? don't answer that. he has sirius's memories (ex-girlfriend killed by death eaters), he has to be connected to him somehow.

great story, a few dropped words here and there, but well written. I hope you get the chance to complete it :)