Reviews for Mai's Teacher
AkashimaUchiha chapter 20 . 7/25
this was a great read, thank you for completing it.
Gamma-X chapter 20 . 7/13
Amazing story. Though, a sequel might be fun, ngl. Imagine her always playfully teasing all the older and younger characters. It'd be funny asf. But yeah. Good story. x3
Gamma-X chapter 10 . 7/12
You keep saying Gaang rather than Gang. Do you just love using the pun that much? xD
Gamma-X chapter 8 . 7/12
Uh, Katara was 14 when they first found the Avatar. Why is she and Sokka 16 and 17?
Gamma-X chapter 7 . 7/12
Ugh, are you serious?! Now he's back to his original dumbass look? This is just fucking disappointing. He looked better before he cut his hair and took out his old clothes from WHO KNOWS WHERE. This is just a big fucking disappointment. Now he looks like a dumbass with a scar and sharingan. He should've made it a ponytail or something like Anko. Urgh. I wonder who wrote that book though... Rooted Tree? Who could that be?
Gamma-X chapter 3 . 7/12
Wow..that's actually a good explanation for what you think Mangekyous are. I never thought of it like that. I'm gonna have to keep that explanation to heart. Also, good chapter this one. And poor Zuko..
Gamma-X chapter 2 . 7/12
Id assume Naruto got his eye from either Sasuke, which is doubtful and is my second guess, or..Kakashi. This was also an entertaining chapter. And Ozai is a cool if he thinks he can manipulate Naruto. Ozai is but a babe in manipulation compared to Madara.
Gamma-X chapter 1 . 7/12
"Hey look, guys! I'm 5,113 years old!" XD
Like, by the Nine, it would seem so wrong for a Naruto x Mai thing since I think it'd be considered something that's even worse and a higher level than Pedophilia. XD
I would wonder how they fall for one another, however. Since Mai has a crush on Zuko and him her.
siriuskyra chapter 3 . 6/28
I’m a late reader but damn. I guessed that it was Shisui’s eye and I was RIGHT ALDJSIDHIS IM SO HAPPY.
Bruhther chapter 3 . 6/23
HONOR!
Guest chapter 20 . 5/11
It was a great story! I love the plot!
Danny Williams chapter 20 . 4/27
Great story with plenty of action, suspense and mystery (some tear jerking).
Bad that Naruto died but good that he was able to take his next form and be with family some.
Best part is that it is complete wrapped up.
BaddieDZ2 chapter 7 . 4/29
Do you plan to just rehash canon through this whole thing, or are you gonna tell your own story?
inistrad chapter 20 . 3/25
well done. you have done something wonderful in drawing out an emotional response... and you defied my expectations with the ending.
Sly-carrots chapter 20 . 3/9
Nice story read it all in one day ish pretty good
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