Reviews for Consequences
Althea Sirius chapter 8 . 9/6/2018
I think it's the chemicals in the Hot tub that can cause people to get sick. A natural spring though, that's debatable.
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
This a good start.
Althea Sirius chapter 13 . 3/2/2018
Sharp Spike, would be cool, or something else.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/7/2017
Uhhh razor teeth or just razor, bleh :p cool story btw
Neema Chhoyang chapter 13 . 1/1/2017
Silent for male or Secrette for female
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
DAMMMMNNNN MILDEW

BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH THE TREASON
Annieyay123 chapter 13 . 7/8/2016
I think you should name the whispering death something that has to do with protector because he or she protected hiccup from outcasts.
Frost Glaive chapter 2 . 3/14/2016
Oh. I thought the cure would be a potato. Or a bezoar. XD
Rosycat chapter 8 . 11/25/2015
Woah. I loved the dream! Is it a premonition that he will train the Whispering Death?
Rosycat chapter 4 . 11/25/2015
WOAH. AWESOEM.
LunarCatNinja chapter 13 . 7/20/2015
I love it! I am especially interested in the temple... Is that going to make a reappearance?
ElizabethBathog chapter 13 . 7/9/2015
Really liked this! Awed at the end there whit the whispering dead! XD
belltoothless chapter 13 . 6/29/2015
How about despicable it was the first one in my head.
Rac2212 chapter 13 . 3/29/2015
Call him BOB!'n
Racgirl chapter 2 . 3/13/2015
Dragonssnow berriesdrugs
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