Reviews for Debts and Accounts
Whovianeverlark17 chapter 1 . 2/27
love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
YASS
Although, I’m not sure I like how Jane was portrayed - he wanted to do something to gain back Lisbon’s favor - he didn’t really apologize for hurting her so much, and he didn’t tell her that he would always be there for her, as she would be for him. But you are, as always, an amazing writer. Keep up the good work!
Grrarrggh chapter 1 . 7/21/2018
If that was OOC then maybe whatever is considered in character should be considered wrong. I prefer your way.
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 12/5/2016
Thanks for a very good read.
Ebony10 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I really loved this!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
:D LOVELY
Frogster chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Aww I loved that! Jane definitely needs to let Lisbon in more. He needs to know just how much she has done for him in the past, how much she cares about him, how much she wants him to be the man she knows he can be. And he needs to realize that he can't push her too far, because then he might lose her, at least for a time.

I wouldn't have ever thought of Jane giving Lisbon the notebook, but it's kind of neat. Definitely a way to show he trusts her with things.

Loved her reaction to his "present". I don't think it was OOC at all. Lisbon is one of the strongest people around, but I refuse to believe that she has never cried over Jane. Especially during and after his stint in Las Vegas, when she had no idea where he was or what he was getting into. And that kind of a show of trust in her must have opened a torrent of emotions.

I hope they did get their kiss at midnight. It looks like they did. :)

Happy New Year! Write more soon!
Alydia Rackham chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
No, at this point, I don't think that's OOC. It fit beautifully, and I adored it. Thank you:D
mwalter1 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
This was a sweet story.

Be careful who you're standing next to when the clock chimes twelve... I'd love to see that scene!
Water-please chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Now that's a plan I'd call worth hatching. Yay for new Year's kiss(es)! :)
Kiryki chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
sdfghjkl; Adorable, okay? Yes Lisbon, be mad at his sorry ass. Make him grovel!

Also I keep mentally crossversing the imagined kiss with Millennium's kiss in the X Files, with that line about the world not ending and their stupid cute smiles. Augh, feeeeeels.
moonserenity089 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Even though it was OOC, I still enjoyed reading this from start to finish. I really wish that on the show that Jane could trust Lisbon more, to inform her when he's doing his schemes or if he's doing something drastic with the RJ case. Wishful thinking I suppose.
Katherine March chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Loved it, it was sweet :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Very nicely written.
Katrina chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Very nice as always. Great start to the year :)
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