Reviews for Blotted Out |
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TwistingHope chapter 8 . 7/13/2018 This was honestly really interesting to read, I always look for stories that grab my attention from the first chapter. I also like your writing style, straight and to the point. I hope you continue this! |
LC003 chapter 8 . 6/6/2017 Great story! Ist this abandoned, or it's a chance I Toni would be finished? |
CherryPit8 chapter 8 . 3/5/2017 This is well written and has an intriguing plot to boot! I hope you're still continuing it. Happy writing! |
OuiSexSi chapter 8 . 5/19/2016 Ooo, intriguing and suspenseful! I'll have to go back and read the other chapters again, but if I remember correctly, this is one of my favorite TheoMione stories. I really, really love your portrayal of Theodore. It's pretty much... well, perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter, as always! |
Dancing-Souls chapter 8 . 5/19/2016 Awesome chapter! Theo has lots to think about. |
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 8 . 5/18/2016 really good! super intense go on! |
azertykeynes chapter 7 . 10/27/2015 This is a nice fic. I've been following this and though the updates aren't as regular as I'd like, the updates themselves - the chapters - are great. I like how you constantly reinforce the title in the chapters: how Theo would like to blot out his existence, his abilities, his awareness of others, how his awareness of Hermione is blotted and how Hermione's future appears blotted out (to him, anyway). In this chapter, though, you mentioned that Professor Sprout wished Theo would give a stupid answer. I assume Sprout doesn't want to call attention to the message she has to give him, but that's still mean to wish. Even if Nott hadn't mentioned Scandinavia or Southeast Asia, China would still be acceptable as Guangdong is in China. It would be an imprecise answer, but still correct. I wonder what Dumbledore's got to say to him. I hope it hasn't got anything to do with his father. |
Pysco-babydoll chapter 7 . 8/22/2015 I like the concept of this rarely are abilities like this seen please keep the story going |
KikiGray chapter 7 . 8/9/2015 i love the concept behind this |
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 7 . 8/7/2015 very lovely |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/19/2015 I love Theo and Hermione |
Dancing-Souls chapter 6 . 6/20/2015 Awe how cute! Yay an update. I had to reread all of the chapters before this one despite remembering the theme of the story. :) |
Vaneesa85 chapter 6 . 6/19/2015 Loving this story. Please continue soon |
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 6 . 6/17/2015 So glad you updated again! Two very beautifully written chapters! Go on |
Quantumphysica chapter 6 . 6/17/2015 Lovely chapter! Honestly, I feel a bit sorry for Theodore. It's a good thing no one knows he's a seer, because the awkwardness would be unbearable. All these things he just "knows"… it makes friendship, or even just social contact, exceedingly difficult. |