Reviews for Sharkboy and LavaGirl 2
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
This is bad
Jordan Smith chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
I thought that Sharkboy and Lavagirl 2 was a fantastic read. The characters were in character and not bad. They were okay but not as amazing as Vault, he was a really good original character. i thoguht that he was a little underdeveloped and I think you shoul;d make a sequal with Volt as the main charafter. The reveal of sharkboy and lavagirl as a couple was smart and it shocked me. I think that Minus was the best character and that he wasn't fleshed out enough. Besies all of this I really appreciated the work on thsi. I would rate this 9/11.
nun chapter 1 . 6/18/2015
this was terrible it is preety much the first one...boring
Our Lord chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
THIS SUUUUUUUCKS
Danielle chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
I really love you came up with name Volt. And I also loved this.
anonymous chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
WOW I LOVE THIS STORY!
But isn't it like, impossible for lava girl to touch anybody? Because her and sharkboy held hands, and the flyers were able to carry her, yet she couldn't touch max's journal.
holly chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Lavagirl and sharkboy cant go out like i said it wont work water and lava dont mix plus she will give him loads of scars and burns and burn makes. Like i said you can introduce two new characters lavaboy for lavagirl his nickname meaning a shorter name jack he can have red hair like lava and there could be a sharkgirl for sharkboy her nickname or short name holly she cand have blonde hair about 5cm below her shoulders and they go out. Lavagirl meets lava boy at the volcano where they save the princess and sharkboy can meet sharkgirl on the way to the volcano on a beach but she pushes him he hits his head she runs of crying but she says sorry. Furthet on the journey she tells lavagirl she loves sharkboy and lavagirl say go tell him. Sharkgirl dose at the end and they both go out and the others are happy with it. And for the rest of lavagirls boy they meet in the volcano but he is evil linus turns him good at the end and then lavagirl and lavaboy go out the others finding it ok. Max gose out with the ice queen and the hug. At the right end that is where sharkgirl tells sharkboy she loves him she asks him out he says yes. Then its fine from the others for sharkgirl and sharkboy to go out. Then sharkgirl and sharkboy kiss long on the beach then it ends. I hope you like it and i hope you could use this in this move or the nxt but keep them at the age of 16 when using this ending plz and can sharkboy look like what he looks like in the first one thanx i hope you can do this xxxxx. By holly its cause i wont to go out with sharkboy i hav a crush on him from the first movie. I hope you can do this as it will be a dream cime true xxxx
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
No offence but sharkboy and lavagirl cant go out she will burn him as she is lava. and in the first one wen she touch max and sharkboy it burned them so it wouldnt work. out mabey you could introduce two new characters lavaboy for lavagirl his nickname jack and sharkgirl for sharkboy nickname meaning a short name holly.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
Great Story
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
sounds good make a movie of it
Ruby Abigail Cut chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Wow I love the first one I watched it when i was in year 2 and I absolutely love it and I think this will be the NO:1
Stephanie chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Hey guys yeah,,,
tayla chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
*yawn* this is boring
Lousia Rose chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Not...horrible but not good. Keep working at it I'm eleven and I'm a good writer (even if I think a paragraph is 9 to 14 sentences).
Rrit chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Great story, but a little short. ;)
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