Lmao amazing story. I loved it xD

Alright, I actually did my reviews backwards and posted the one for chapter two on chapter one. Love them both and I will still do a real review for chapter one.

I have actually read Chapter One three times now and am finally making myself sit down and do a proper review.

I am always so impressed by your grasp of the characters. That is one thing that has always kept me from writing fanfic – the fear that I would not be able to do a character justice. The fact that I can visualize, without even trying, so many of the scenes in this piece is a real testament to your ability.

A couple of my favorites:
•Bruce smiling at the memory of equipment being broken the last time he tried to tease Tony and his being awkward around Pepper.
•Tony and the lab table: "You know these tables can hold about 1,000 pounds each. Even with repeated impact," "I could give you a demonstration. Now, now would be good." So perfectly Stark.
•"’Of course we'll watch her,’ Tony said taking the carrier and handing it to Bruce.” I actually snorted out loud at that.
•"Are you off your knees Tony?" Pepper called back. "Yes, Pepper."
•Pepper e-mailing baby care notes to Tony and Bruce.

I love the intimate gestures between Tony and Bruce: Bruce batting Tony’s arms away from his waist; Tony lifting Bruce’s shirt and kissing along his spine; Bruce leaning his head against Tony’s shoulder; Tony scientifically observing the changes in Bruce as he becomes aroused.

Tony and Jarvis trying to figure out how to take care of Abby was so perfect. Again, I could visualize it so clearly and it made me laugh out loud.

Tony and Abby – so beautiful. Tony felt safe enough to let down his guard because all she wanted to do was listen to him; no judgment, no expectations. And when he sent the images to hover over her crib as he told her the story of how he and Bruce came to be, I seriously thought my heart was going to explode.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for entertaining a new plot bunny!