| Reviews for Viper II: Celestial Omens |
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   Vai.S chapter 3 . 3/24 super povídka,jen vždycky mě mrzí, když něco takhle čtivého a skvělého nemá konec :/ těším se, jak si přečtu i tvá další díla. Je to temnější než co většinou čtu, ale naprosto bezchybné a úžasné :) |
| Bele chapter 3 . 1/27 ooh that is promising... I hope you are doing well and all is good, I will put your story on follow in case you get a chance to continue writing... have a good time wherever you are right now! |
| EspirituDelMar chapter 3 . 10/24/2017 aww this is it? Update soon please, this is sooo good! |
| Gurgaraneth chapter 1 . 7/15/2017 Update sn carnt wait till harry shows himself to old friends nd enemys |
| TheFluffyBakura chapter 3 . 3/12/2017 This is REALLY GOOD! I've never read a dark Harry fic the way you write it! :O |
| Rin Hyung chapter 3 . 3/11/2017 just so you know that there are still people reading it and waiting for next chapters... first part was what made me into so much delight. second part is confusing but it only adds to my curiosity. there is not much stories which are a perfect balance of plot, mystery and blood/violence in it so I am all hoping and waiting. |
| draco7347 chapter 3 . 6/13/2016 really loved this story cant wait for new chapters |
| the-princess-of-quite-a-lot chapter 3 . 5/30/2016 I just love this universe and I hope that you keep writing in it! |
| acetwolf94 chapter 3 . 5/25/2016 I like it! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
| mjk777 chapter 3 . 12/21/2015 Please continue to write. This is an amazing piece of work. If you feel that you don't want to publish anymore can you send me an outline and any other finished chapters so I can continue. I will also beta if you need one. |
| KYRAgabriela chapter 3 . 12/17/2014 I love it ! I finished the first part and I raced to read the second. Very cool ! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/15/2014 Love it love it love it.. I'm really confused about all that's going on and I love it ! Please update soon ! All the best, C.S Augustoni |
| E chapter 3 . 5/27/2014 Idk where you're going with this...but it's utterly delicious. |
| Rose Teardrops chapter 3 . 4/18/2014 Great story, only suggestion for improvement would be to make the chapter breaks clearer. When you're changing from Viper to Draco, put something in between to show the change. In the books, JK uses an asterisk to do it. If you have no better ideas, that's a possibility. Please update as soon as you can. RT xx |
| Rain chapter 3 . 3/26/2014 By all rights this review should have been on the first part...But let me say this. You are amazing. You managed to twist a cliche and make it into one of the best Dark!Hary fics I've ever seen. I wasn't expecting the ending, and the way you continued it just blew my mind..Great job! Also, to counter the seeming "perfect-ness" of the characters, could you try showing how messed up they are? |
