I really liked your story so far it's very original, theres not many stories where Harry isn't the only one who gets to travel to another dimension. Plus the way you write is pretty good. I hope you will continue it :)

I LOVE IT

Dear Ember:

This is just a small thing, but it might be worth your consideration: Why is it that, whenever Fury spoke in this chapter, I had the overwhelming impression that it should have been Coulson speaking? Each line would just have seemed so much more natural in the latter's mouth, somehow.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Sirius tá sendo um idiota total. O que é totalmente a cara dele kk E Fenrir todo fofo com Harry, s[erio, coisa mais linda. Espero por mais 3

I am a bit sad to see Sirius being so immature, his years in Azkaban can excuse this considering SHIELD probably had him under a psychological evaluation. I didn't him to be so quick against Harry, too bad for him. However, I am very glad to see some Tony friendly and mostly someone finally pointing out the problem with Wendy! I can't wait for them to bond honestly, and also with Loki :D

Really interesting plot, I loved reading it.

I would really love it if u continued writing the story. It's interesting and wonderful...

Ahhhhh!
When ever this story is updated I feel like it’s my birthday and Christmas all over agin. I honestly do not go on fanfic anymore, but I cannot resist checking in on this one every now and then, I even have the book mark saved to my home page so I can quickly see.

I love the direction that this is taking, the build up and the characterisation you portray

Please continue to write this and know that you have a very loyal reader out here too

definitely sounds like Sirius still hasn't grown up and able to look at things from all sides and angles.

will Harry make sure that he nor Fenrir and Severus cannot be harmed by using the life debt and how long before they get the other DE's and Voldemort since Voldemort will not be able to get any other wizards to join his group

yes, Harry did not join Voldemort's side to rule, how will the next part go

Was not expecting that of Loki (I had thought of it before) and wonder how long before they can be able to talk with each other

I am curious how Harry joined Voldemort and how he will react to Sirius being alive

Nice, thanks.

Good to have u back with this story

I am so happy to read another great chapter of this wonderful story. Thank you :)