I love it I just always pictured Thor being the one that's fucking and Loki being the broken mess under Thor. But this story was really great I loved it.

good story. though then yelling "Oden" during sex is weird. I know its supposed to be like yelling "God" but he is their father, so it's a little creepy.

YOUR MY WHORE! XD

wow... loki on top! AWESOME! X3

dude awesome and love the hawkeye

I was misled by you claiming this a Thor/Loki smut, when it was quite the contrary. It was a good story, but I could not enjoy it to the fullest.

Ohhh my god words can not describe how much i loved this! LOKI WAS SO AWESOME! Seriously though you have to write more Loki fics, maby Loki x Tony if you take requests?

HOT

Did Hawkeye see the whole thing? O.o

I loled. That was...interesting to say the least. Nice job!

You're a wonderful writer :) this was a great short story!