The plot is definitely unique, but there’s a few loopholes. For one, even though I know you did it for plot purposes, Kakashi would never ever abandon Naruto the way he did, it goes against everything he stands for. Also, the very premise of the story is based off of the fact that Tazuna refused to give up Gato’s name, so how did Naruto magically know who was behind it when he confronted Zabuza? I’m enjoying the story so far, I just think you need to think things through a bit more. Thank you for sharing your story!

that was good keep the chapter coming

Great story with a awesome plot, there a a few things you could do to improve it though such as re write the first five chapters to make them flow better as well as improving the character development as the introduction to the jiyara (not sure how to spell his name right) toad sage appears to be forced upon the plot and it comes across as un natural that he would just turn up without showing him at least looking a bit or at the very least talking with one of his contacts in wave to get information, you could also change the fact that naruto has a katana yet his is training to use a claymore like sword that has only one edge instead of the standard double edge version.
You could also change the conversation between the third hokage and kakashi as it is my opinion that a person Naruto calls jiji especially the third hokage of all people who is one of the only people to see Naruto as a hero to just be like oh you let our jincuriki go into hostile territory alone with no/ skill or training and then not even drop your team of at konoha, quickly brief the hokage then go back to help (preferably with some kind of back up since you think they would be jonin level enemy's in the area raising the mission level to a high b rank low a rank mission at best and a s rank cluster f**k at worst (excuse the language there it is the only way I could think of word that point), and you then expect us to accept the hokage would be relaxed about this situation when he sees Naruto s his own grandson, this in my opinion breaks the entire plot die to it breaking all forms of logic now it would be understandable if Naruto was able to stand up and fight on his own in equal fitting with kakashi, then I could understand the hokage being relaxed about the situation but as you haven't shown Naruto possessing such skill (at least up until he meets killer bee), apart from that the first three chapters are quite good. The fourth and fifth chapters improved on character development just enough to make the reader start to get emotional attached to your version of zabuza, haku and naruto, although jiyara still appears to be forced upon the plot just to give an excuse for hunter nins not to be sent out after him. Not really anything I could see that needs changing or adapting to fit better, then we have the seventh chapter which is much better and told most of the points I made about development and making sure the introduction of new people appears natural, if you want to ask me about any issues I have raised then drop me a PM and we can talk about things that could be done to improve it. (I also know how hard it is to write a story with out a beta if you check my profile you will be able to read the mess that is my first fanfiction) good luck and I hope you continue writing soon, pm me if you want to ask me about the points I raised.

It's not about how many people read it. It's about how much you enjoy writing it.

Hell yea

it's awesome so far.

'You will fall to the darkness' I didn't know star wars was around there somewhere O.o

Warn people that you changed the gender of Haku, some people like the androgynous male that he was and deserve some modicum of respect before wasting their time on this or any other female!Haku fic.

Shadow clones is a Konoha technique.

This is a great start to a story that could turn out to be a good length, I hope you come back and work on it some more.

PLEASE! FINISH THIS FAN FIC I LOVE IT ITS FREAKING BAD ASS. SO PLEASE CONTINUE WORKING ON THIS PLEASE!

Update soon please

Glad that you are resuming, but its been over 3 months since the last update..please update.

Dammit please continue!

update some more it a ok story so far .