Ok, mi corazón no puede más. Esto fue fantástico. No puedo creer que haya dicho lo del gato antes de aceptar que la ama, pero me quedo satisfecha con su explicación, lo que ellos tienen va más allá. Me encanta cómo se retan, pelean y son agresivos entre ellos, es un juego que se traen y les fascina ¡Me gustó mucho!

HOT and incredibly cute.:) Also I love how Vegeta still makes empty threats about destroying the Earth, haha. How cute.

This was very well written, you are able to convey so many details in such a small amount of words. Your writing style is lovely. I loved the part where Bulma demanded he say certain things to her and when Vegeta said there is nothing that can describe what they have for each other, so sweet! This was lovely!

it was great so sweet

This is somehow both sexy and adorable. I like to think niteryde's "Thrill of the Hunt" comes next ;)

That was hot for one. For two, that was really sweet Vegeta-style to say that human language cannot describe their relationship.

I enjoyed this a lot! Even though it’s sexy one shot you get so much about their relationship from it; the banter, the lust, the love... It’s really well done. Your writing’s great, the dialogue felt natural and the descriptions are spot on. Great job!

Swoon!

I loved the Grumpy Cat reference... It was too funny. I appreciate that your sentences are carefully constructed, giving the text a nice flow. Your vocabulary and word choice was a bonus too! A pleasure to read! :D

So hot, and I love it so very much. Great job!

I admit I'm stalking your stories now lol.
LOVE that grumpy cat reference! He is Vegeta in cat form!
Steamy, sexy, in character. Super one-sided! Brava lady! Why aren't there more reviews on this?! Lol c'mon people!

Scouter...PFFT! IT'S OVER 9000! Great fic, and I love Grumpy Cat! She is so cute!

So I just realised that even though I read this ages ago, I never reviewed it...what the hell was wrong with me?

Let me tell you now, that usually when authors describe clothing, it's so boring and takes something away from the story, because it'll be a block of description and I ignore it..but yours; it was minimalistic and just 'oh my god' "her short, tight black skirt, the white blouse that hinted the color of her red bra, the black leather heels that showed off her freshly painted red toenails..." -very well written!

Your description is just amazing and I loved "Unlike Goku, he had never left her side: strong, faithful, unswerving."-you just basically summed up in a few words, why vegeta is so much better than goku! I've always felt he was this amazing saviour, but his family paid the price and I've always felt sorry for chichi, no wonder she's so uptight!

"I'm not your goddam pet to do as you say" he complained,"-I laughed so hard, you have vegeta spot on...and not just in this fic, but in all of them!

"You're my grumpy cat!"-best line ever, I love the playfulness of it!

"The concept of love nor anything contained in your pitiful human language can even begin to describe what we have"-that was just perfect, it sums up vegeta and his view on there relation spot on. He is an alien, so clearly his view on 'love' is going to be different and I absolutely love it when authors pick up on that. I always like to believe that what Vegeta and Bulma have is more than love and you made him say just that!

I love how at then end he is all trying to play it cool...'concern , care pfft'...I'll just play it off like the boy and the baby were an after thought (when clearly they are not!)-so vegeta!

I'm so googling grumpy cat!

An amazing one-shot, I hope you write more of these!

Uggghhhhh I loved it so much I wish I had written it! I'm going to go read it again now. And just so you know, I love how it begins with a very beautiful description of desire to such well written, exacting smut that still hints at this great, complex relationship that they have...I think that's part of what makes post-Buu fics so delectable: the drama is out of the way and now they can get around to being this adorably understanding and impassioned couple. (For example...I love how, although he loves bantering with her, he gave in to her-with such grace!) You need to write more! :I (grumpy cat face) right meow!

I love it!