Reviews for Make This Go On Forever
Barakudada chapter 17 . 9/27/2018
Oh, this story is very cool and beatiful. I'm really love this. Love your Jasper and Bella. They are perfect couple)) And though, you don't update story over 5 years... I hope that you will finish it, honestly. Thank you for this wonderful lovestory 3
Guest chapter 3 . 8/29/2017
Are u going to finish
mamacasper06 chapter 17 . 11/19/2016
Is this story abandoned?
Guest chapter 17 . 9/13/2016
Please update
Debbie Hicks chapter 17 . 1/7/2016
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Chapter 18.
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liferscove2118 chapter 17 . 8/24/2015
Lovely work on what you have posted.
3Moons chapter 17 . 3/16/2015
I like your stories. I hope you will update this one soon as it's almost 2 years that you hadn't.
Ca.zaphira chapter 17 . 1/7/2015
Read the first part and now this portion of the sequal. Even though it has been some time since your last update, hoping you find your way back to posting more at some point in time. Would hope for sooner rather than later. Really enjoying this story and hoping to see how it turns out.
Hikada chapter 17 . 11/2/2014
love the read more
captaincurly chapter 17 . 8/24/2014
Really enjoying the story...Please, Please, continue!
JaspersSweetie chapter 17 . 7/27/2014
I've really been enjoying this story, and truly hope you intend to return to it one day. It would be a shame to leave it unfinished as it's so well-written.
lynne0731 chapter 17 . 3/30/2014
Freaking awesome I am in l love
ASongbirdDigna chapter 17 . 2/7/2014
Hope you're planning to update soon. Dying to read thec wedding and find out what happens with the Volturi.
ReginaSerpentes chapter 17 . 8/24/2013
Update soon!
ccaajjaa chapter 17 . 8/1/2013
I have spent the last week reading this and TMBttS and they are fabulous, I cannot begin to understand how much work and commitment goes into writng a story but please, Please, PLEASE continue.
Your Jasper is one of my absolute favorites, I cannot think of another story, even when J is the lead character, that has let us understand so much of his inner thoughts, what motivates him & why.
Your alternate view points are seamless, a couple of sentences to reinforce the change of POV then you are moving the story along rather than the usually repeat of the previous chapter. Oh and love the lack of graphic lemons so competely unnecessary.
Please another chapter!
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