so fucking hot. i love faberry smut- it's mouthwatering

More chapters please!

i love this chapter

Omg this is so hot!

glad ur back and all caught up good updates

Fantastic finish (if it is one. If not - look forward to future updates, of which I hope there will be many ;)) Pacing was great and the balance of 'steaminess' and love/sweetness/comfort was very well judged. Brilliant story

So hott!

HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT! Love it! )

I've loved this series, so I can't say I wouldn't be disappointed if there wasn't more. The POV changes were a little hard to get used to at first but after the first chapter I kind of started liking them. Of course, this chapter was wonderful too so I suppose it doesn't make too much of a difference. I like reading your writing either way. Constructive criticism is always nice but I've found that you just need to write what you'll be happy with because at the end of the day you're writing for you :)

I hope it's not the end.
I really like this, and how you write them...I love dominating!Rachel, and yours is totally plausible!

Please do not let this be the end. This is the best written anal I've ever read.

I'm really glad you stuck with one POV, and I'm glad you tried to go longer...this was really hot!

To be honest, I think this is a good place to end because you kind of just started this with this particular focus. However, I think you should keep writing. You do a pretty good job with smut, so you shouldn't abandon it. But, maybe next story you should try to widen the plot just a bit. As I mentioned, don't leave out the smut; just add (a little) more plot.

That also will lend itself to even better long chapters. Expanding a small chapter without adding plot elements can be a little tedious to read and write (e.g., it's not necessary to write that they kissed for about thirty minutes...a good long time is enough), but I suggest not cutting off your chapters like you did this one when you have more story to tell.

One more suggestion...try writing in third person. It's generally easier to read, and only rarely works really well. This was better than some, but I think it could have been much better with one consistent, third person POV.

Amazing! I want woman like Rachel. Wow

Ahhhhhhhhh so good. Please more soon!

I love this...but if I may, the switching POV was confusing, I had to re-read parts before getting that it wasn't Quinn talking anymore but Rachel...not that I minded the re-reading ;-) but maybe next time use only one POV or signal the change?