| Reviews for Of Authors, Books and Fuinjutsu |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 3/19/2019 I know its been 5 years but is there a chance for more with this? |
 chester258 chapter 8 . 5/17/2018 Really like this story! Hope to read more! |
| Mallory Anderson chapter 8 . 5/10/2018 I love your story! I'd never read a Jiriaya pairing story before (I assumed that might be where this story was heading). I'm sorry to see this unfinished but you gotta do what you gotta do right? Anyway thanks for the story and I hope you are well. :) |
| Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 8 . 4/16/2018 Hope you update someday really unique story |
| Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 6 . 4/16/2018 30,000 books that is so Hermione |
| Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 5 . 4/16/2018 Like that they are each other's proofreader |
| Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 4 . 4/16/2018 Completely different from other stories I have read really compelling |
| Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 2 . 4/16/2018 Interesting |
| Nyght elf chapter 8 . 3/13/2018 OH such an amazing fic! One of the best in your collection in my opinion. Not that your others are bad. Every one is unique. I just hope you will return to writing, lots of your fans are waiting. I know you must be busy, everyone has a life so I thank you for sharing your talent with us. Will eagerly wait for any updates from you! Take care! |
| RitzChan chapter 8 . 2/2/2018 this is pretty good, and actually pretty realistic ! I'm sad you haven't updated this in so long tho |
| cruciosirius chapter 8 . 1/9/2018 wow, I love this story, it's a shame that it seems discontinued |
| Fan of ur story chapter 8 . 12/20/2017 Umm, I really love this, but I noticed that at the top of chapter 8 u tell us u would be posting the next 2 chapters in a few days. It’s been quite a bit longer then that, which makes me ask are u going to came back to this story and what happened too the 2 chapters u must of had basically done? |
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/15/2017 This story is amazing! Please continue your this. |
| crystalinowl chapter 8 . 11/17/2017 amazingly beautiful and good story so far! I really hope you continue this story. |
| Luumus chapter 5 . 8/10/2017 A continuation of my previous review, if you will: So far, I can see bits of Hermione in Hisana, she's not a totally new OC so kudos for that. And it's been interesting, the thing with Jirayia, but if I can give just one advice is to find a Beta and work on the dialogues. They are a bit stilted and don't quite flow as realistic as they could. Another little trick is to act out loud the conversation and see if they sound realistic, it really helps to see when you should use punctuation, if the vocabulary is too formal or too easy going considering the character and situation they are in and if the dialogue is something a person would actually say or if it sounds too much like exposition. Cheers Luumus |
