Has this story been abandoned? It great! I would love to read more.

please give us a finish on this one - please~~~

hmmm, what will happen, will tony and the demon come to an arrangment, will Gibbs understand...fly off into the sunset with each other for their next hunt...can't wait for more xx

Good story

Like the story and really sweet. Although wouldn't driving to New Orleans save them at least a week and half from DC instead if having to fly there 2 weeks ahead?

Hope to see this updated soon! Really loving this story!

I was just curious to see if you plan to add more to this story. I might have forgotten about it but then you posted Random Getaway and it reminded me because the names are similar.

OMG love this story.

Have you ever thought about making the demon come out of Tony in the form of a baby?

Make it a supernatural mpreg of sorts maybe?

just a suggestion!

again love this story! :)

Well that was very good. The discussion with Gibbs about what to do about Asad should be interesting. Please update soon.

I enjoyed the talk with the demon. It was something that helped Tony a lot.

Great chapter

Looking forward to Tony's decision aboutg Asad.

I don't like how sudeenly friendly Asad is. I'm afriad he has something up his sleeve, if you will. I hope I'm wrong. Great job.

I am so glad you are back with more of this. First off, the Ziva/Palmer scene - Oh my that was incredible! Tony's talk with Asad was really good. Now we have a better understanding of what is going on with Tony. Very interesting. Well done.

As for the long break - some times it's necessary. If you're not inspired it's good to step away for a while. Your readers will know if you are just phoning it in. You care enough to not go that route and as a reader I appreciate it. Hope surgery goes well. All the best.

Glad to see this active again. Looking forward to more. Interesting story...certainly not a typical Gibbs/Tony story