ok, there is nothing dubious about that consent. That was rape pure and simple. And a rather twisted part of me rather liked Thorin this way. Don't know why. Disturbing, but nicely done!

Is there a next part?

(Drools) Those two... I will just say I like this pairing and this one shot very much!

this was a really nice story... I think you portrayed Thranduil perfectly! Proud and supremely cool even during the influence of fiery passion. XD He's one though cookie, that one. Nice work! X3

I read this on AO3, just found it here and thought to leave you a note ;)
This story is a joy to re-read!

O Lord, this was amazing. I have no words for it.
Should you ever have the time, please, please, please write this from Thranduil's perspective..Please?

Jeebus on the toast... that was... damn. This is deffo one of the most erotic fic I've ever read.

Oooh, that fic made my night! Keep up your amazing writing!

So beautifully written, the characters are perfectly portrayed and aren't unrealistic whatsoever. Your writing has a timelessness to it, which is truly beautiful. Your writing is tasteful and meaningful, enjoyable to read. Even the speech was perfect, it is a hard ethic slur of sorts to portray and you pulled it off brilliantly. Please, write some more of your tasteful poetic dwarf and elf sexcapades 3

Now THAT is what I want to see more of! Hot damn! Will there be a part two for the spring meeting? Can there be? Please!

Perfect, just perfect.

Your way with words leaves nearly everything I've read on this site to utter shame. Talent like this is so very rare, especially when placed somewhere on the internet, for FREE. haha Seriously, you must start getting paid for this kind of writing asap, if you aren't already, that is. You could easily create a very strong novel of your own.

In regards to this story, however, just damn. Just, fuck. Everyone was kept deliciously IC, and the way that you wrote Thranduil sent chills down my spine every time. You revel in his beauty just flawlessly, mirror it in words in such a way that has me re-reading several which sentences with the most frenetic fervor. Seriously, Thranduil is just..omg. haha And Thorin, of course, a handsome piece of Dwarven arse that you describe so.. prettily. That smut, though, that smut. Never read anything so marvelously sexy in my life. The symbolism behind every action and reaction, the dialogue that was exchanged between the two.. simply mind-numbing. You capture every moment like no one else.

Please, don't ever stop doing what you do so well. May it be here, or in publishing means. You have some serious talent. c: I hope to read more from you in regards to this rare, yet delectable pairing.

xx

O.O
..Is this the amazing author who wrote this on the Hobbit Kink Meme?
*hugs*
I absolutely loved this! It's amazing and perfectly well written and I'm going to continue reading it over and over again!
*favs author and story*

Omg awesomely beautiful