Hey, Manian Jack here, and I friggen lost it when I read that Ryland and Happy were playing tag in the parking lot lol!

I know it's late, but I wished it was a boy!

"might be persuaded into making it longer"

I know this is late, but I did have an idea for a name. Jocelyn Alfhild Foster-Odinson. Have a mix of an American name and a Norse name.

Meaning-
Jane- From a Germanic masculine name, variously written as Gaudelenus, Gautselin, Gauzlin, along with many other spellings. It was derived from the Germanic element Gaut, which was from the name of the Germanic tribe the Gauts, combined with a Latin diminutive suffix. The Normans brought this name to England in the form Goscelin or Joscelin, and it was common until the 14th century. It was revived in the 20th century primarily as a feminine name, perhaps an adaptation of the surname Jocelyn (a medieval derivative of the given name). In France this is a masculine name only.

Alfhild- From the Old Norse name Alfhildr which was composed of the elements alfr "elf" and hildr "battle". In Norse legend Alfhild was a maiden who disguised herself as a warrior in order to avoid marriage to king Alf. Her life was perhaps based on that of a 9th-century Viking pirate.

Foster- (1) Derived from the surname Forester, meaning- Denoted a keeper or one in charge of a forest, or one who has charge of growing timber in a forest (see FOREST).
(2) Occupational name for a scissor maker, derived from Old French forcetier.
(3) Occupational name for a woodworker, derived from Old French fustrier.
(4) Nickname given to a person who was a foster-child or foster-parent.

Odinson- Of course, son of Odin.

I know I'm extremely late, but I just wanted to come up with a name, if Jane and Thor have another girl at any point.

You should do a one-shot type thing for Ryland and Anya's wedding!

Personally I adore clintasha so I think it should be a boy

Thane

Steve is my dads name lol.. so when i read this i awkwardly thought of my dad.

I can honestly say that I have very few complaints about your story. I read it whenever life is overwhelming and it makes me happy. ) The grammar is good, the story is fluffy (which some don't like but I happen to love) and the characterizations are all spot on.

However, one thing that's kind of an issue is the rating. You have a few things that don't exactly seem fit for 'General Audiences.' But, that's not an issue with the story at all.

I'm so glad to see that you've published other works following this. I'll definitely be reading those as well.

Have a lovely day.

Great story, but maybe up the rating to T or at least K? There is a little bit of strong language and implications of sex that are kind of heavy for the K rating. But yeah, love the whole thing, completely adorable.

Storm Fosterson

I absolutely loved this story. Very good job!

So I have to review because I don't think I have yet. I love this fic in its entirety and this chapter most of all. I'm loving' me some Clintasha feels! This was a certified 'Eeeeeep!' moment.

Great story, however in Norse culture and in turn, Asgardian Culture, babies take on the father's first name as a part of their last name and then either datter or son.

For example: Bor is Odin's father, therefore Odin is Odin Borson (Odin Son of Bor). Thor is the son of Odin and Loki is technically the son of Laufey, therefore they are Thor Odinson and Loki Laufeyson. If Thor had a son his son's last name would be 'Thorson' but since he and Jane had a daughter the child's name would be Dahlia Gersemi Foster Thorsdatter (Dahlia Daughter of Thor).

Girl,girl, girl