This was AMAZING! I completely and utterly ADORED this AU; thank you SO MUCH for writing and sharing it! The idea is AWESOME and you executed it BEAUTIFULLY! Also, 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 coolness points to you for being bilingual and for publishing a story in your second language! THATS. JUST. AMAZING! Your English is REALLY REALLY good, and had you not said at the beginning that it wasn't your first language, I never would have suspected. Thank you so much again for writing and sharing this; I LOVED it!

Loved it! I admit that I would have liked a more dramatic ending, for example a heroic Bilbo jumping between Azog and Thorin and almost dying in the process or something like that, but well, I'm just to evil!
Really fantastic story, I enjoyed every part of it, particularly the developping relationship between Bilbo and Thorin.
Great job, thanks for sharing it!

Thanks for the story !
It is a great idea those visions : it allowed you to use both the movies and the book, while adding your own spin to it all ;D
See you around !

***Pyrane***

Loved your story very much, several chapters made me shiver! Thank you very much! You have a profound knowledge of Tolkiens work!
Do you read Discworld by Terry Pratchett? Some of your descriptions of different timelines entwining reminded me very much of him.

I loved this one too - it closed most loose ends that I have wondered about. I especially love the notion of sth more between Bilbo and Thorin :-)

So Bilbo left Erebor for Shire!? I was hoping he would stay... Anyway I loved the journey you have taken us on, unexpected as it may be the hobbit was more unexpected so:-) but I loved each and every moment of it :-) thank you for writing and postinf it, and especially thank you for finishing this story!:-)

Amazing! I loved the philosophical and metaphisical outlook on fate and time and balance in life you gave us in this chapter :-) and that they lived of course!

So Bilbo managed to convince Thorin without using his trump card and the fate of the world changed:-)

I loved it! I also felt disapointed that it was not dwarves who have slain the dragon so your story gave them juistice:-) and now they know about the upcoming danger so they can somehow prepare for it... And what fate you are giving the Arkestone?

Bilbo thief extraordinary:-)

Nice chapter :-) and Bilbo with braids must be so cute!

You really know the Middle Earth history well:-) if Bilbo so angry and cranky because of the ring influence ? Or has he just had enough? Anyway I'm glad they are out even if I loved your Legolas:-)

Poor Bilbo! And that cursed ring which brings him suffering! But Thorin is so sweet:-)

So,so,so! Bilbo showed courage and wit again - did he really overpower the ring or did the ring not try to use his full power? And now elves! Here we go!:-)

Nice chapter:-) some calm before storm... Will the Mirkwood adventure go differently than in canon? And I hope that the ring understimated Bilbo :-)