Da what?

la continuaras espero que si tengo muchas ganas de ver el sigiente capitulo

i know it feels odd to even hope for an update after what 2 years? but man do i love this story and hope it gets finished one day

So, I was thinking... Right now naruto is goofy, naive and whatnot, but what if a world changes him drastically and he, after accumulating certain powers becomes kind of a keeper of the worlds. I mean that when a world is on the brink of destruction, he swoops in and saves the world. How does that sound?

A fight at the start, well that was unexpected. I thought that naruto would talk to the other guys and then peacefully become a part of the group. But this too works for me, seeing naruto fight and trash talk (a little)

Nice one bro, I somewhat understood your theory behind... well everything and its something different though I am not sure how things will work out between naruto and kurama when they don't have their memories. Ok then, Next chapter

i don't get it
i mean the plot, characters, settings etc. everything's perfect
you've even got a unique pairing (naruto x yuri) which is like a bonus
yet this story has only 74 reviews!
i mean seriously a story as amazing as this deserves way more reviews than that
i just hope the lack of reviews doesn't discourage you from continuing this story since your loyal readers would be fairly disappointed

This story is interesting, please keep updating because the readers need their fix! Moreover, I can't believe this fic's review count is so low! It's a great fic and deserves more! But I still have to ask... Are you going to update this story again?

Ridiculous. What is it with authors and writing overly dramatic scenes of Naruto being unable to hurt his friends? He regularly punches the daylights out of Lee and Kiba via their sparring matches and probably wouldn't have qualms about doing the same with the others. Moreover, there are plenty of scenes where he's fighting ninjas who are hanged into the forms of his friends and he still beats the shit out of them. NPCs are even LESS than that since they don't even have a soul.

Then there's the fact that Naruto's bijuu mode is completely underpowered in this chapter. Here's the scale we're talking about. Kakashi's speed using Raikiri is fast enough to cut through the visible portion of lightning as it travels upwards from the ground. The speed required intercept a lightning strike after it has begun is 220,000,000 miles per hour. As fast as that is, the Raikage is even faster than Kakashi. And Naruto in his bijuu mode is even faster than that. In other words, Naruto should have been fast enough to kill Naoi at least a hundred times over AND still have time to spare to remove the guns away from the look-alikes heads.

I get that this isn't an action fiction and that it's more drama, but it's ridiculously laughable how much Naruto struggled. This MIGHT have been understandable had Naruto been in his base mode (even that takes a bit of suspension of belief), but in bijuu mode enhanced with senjutsu? The fight should have been over before it began.

It's a shame because this story had been outstanding otherwise.

I like angel beats I would like some more chapters please

I would have to agree with Tenma's comment on the pairing. Kanade is more fitting for Naruto than Yuri. Got nothing against Yuri, but she just doesn't seem to be the person for Naruto despite her dark past. Kanade would actually keep him under control from his outbursts and recklessness (or at least try too) and they can fill in their loneliness together. Kanade needs someone like Naruto to open her up and get her to smile. I request a rewrite with the pairing being NarutoxKanade or NarutoxKanadexYuri

HELL YES! Sexy Jutsu FTW!

WHAT?! NO FOUR TAILS MODE?! Bullshit!

Action or not, this was really enjoyable! :D

I WAS TOTALLY WRONG! Thank you so much for not stripping Naruto of any way to defend himself! :D