| Reviews for Time and Portals |
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   Paxloria chapter 15 . 5/11/2016 Ahh! This has been an amazing read. It's even brought tears to my eyes. Two things I didn't get though. 1). Knowing what would happen, why didn't the parents keep/carry gas masks on them in preperation for the Neurotoxin? 2). All that wierd disconnected forshadowing with the spacial rips and that ending bit with the underwater city. |
| Paxloria chapter 5 . 5/11/2016 Its a nice story so far. Might have been good to insert PAGE BREAKS or LINES to seperate the different locations/sections from each other. |
| Brianna Blank chapter 3 . 3/15/2016 mmm so this isn't chell... that's cool. this is still good. |
| Brianna Blank chapter 1 . 3/15/2016 *INTERNAL SQUEALING* |
| John Tanner chapter 15 . 11/17/2015 Amazing! Incredible! Fantastic! I love it! Make moooooore! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/13/2015 Holy crap! There's a lot of Bioshock references here! Awesome! |
| Nestila crystal chapter 1 . 9/18/2014 lllolooooooovvveee it... |
| 101Asa chapter 15 . 8/23/2014 Keep it up! I love the mixes! |
| LunaFan521 chapter 14 . 8/6/2014 Please make more of this. It's an awesome story. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/8/2014 This is a very interesting and very well laid-out fic! |
| the doctor chapter 10 . 9/6/2013 you lefy it hanging :( can you write a sequel |
| the doctor chapter 3 . 9/6/2013 brilliant! |
| Homemadebong chapter 10 . 8/23/2013 Loving the story, but sound doesn't travel in space. The only point where he would have heard them would be the time while they were still in contact when he hit him |
| Luigi's Wacky World chapter 9 . 6/1/2013 ...wow. Just, wow. You decided to make GLaDOS the center of a fixed point in time, just so you wouldn't have any excuse to prevent her/its creation, despite the fact that this fic is VERY AU. Not that I'm complaining, mind you. I think it's great you did that, even though GLaDOS is a sadistic bitch of an A.I. |
| T13Doll chapter 2 . 5/1/2013 I like it so far! Plus, it made me happy that you didn't forget about Abby in the Doctor's explanation. But now that leaves me to wonder, what happened to Chell? Guess I'll just have to keep reading |
