Omg that was hilarious ! Great read c:

Scott is adorable and so is this story. The concepts of a vegan witch hooking two people up via a sleeping curse (go Edith!) and Derek the Disney Princess entertained me immensely. Awesome.

That was so cute! Great job writing in Scott's voice!

The Scott voice and train of thought YES!

LMAO!

The imagery in this fic is so spectacular it makes me want to cry; Derek would make the most beautiful Disney princess that ever was. Thanks for posting! I don't think I've squealed that much while reading since maybe Remus asked Harry to be Ted's godfather (sorry, tangent). Anyways this was super cute!

Extremely amusing!

I like that your Scott is dim but not dumb and how he is always at the cusp of understanding how his non stop Allison chatter gets to people but never really getting there. All of it is endearing and well done.

Great job!

You have Scott's pov bang on and boy is it hilarious. How derpy he is and always thinking of Alison instead of the task in hand...brilliant. Derek made me chuckle too when he woke up, especially with the whole creepy smelling debacle. Your writing is actually wonderful, if you're interested in constructive criticism at all there were a couple of lines Stifles said which didn't ring quite true to character, rather they seemed to be a way to force the scenarios you wanted. But believe me there's no way I'd feel able to nitpick like that if I didn't actually love all your work to death. Don't ever stop writing :)

Bawwww

I always love your stories! Any chance they can finally round home (? im sorry did I say that right? I'm Australian I don't know much about baseball, even the metaphorical type!) and we can have some pack/sherif reactions?

I love the slightly helpful potato-ey Scott!