Its good. Just keep a tight rein on the dark side of your brain. \

Sweeeeet!

Really Nice work, although tooooo short .!

Keep Up the good writing :D

I like this one :)

I can't say how much I love this, it was so sad reading about everyone in pain, but sooo lovely to read that they would recover. Thank you for this amazing story and please keep writing! :)

Perfect and flawless and awesome again :) BUT SUPER SAD. Poor Tony :'(

sequel maybe? :) I loved it

Perfectly written and I'm glad that in the ending all the Avengers got back together as a team.

:D
if only you put just a little clintasha in there, I'd turn into a puddle. A level ten puddle, if meltedness had degrees and could be scaled from the mildly melted one to a level of ten.

This is amazing. please oh please continue this! :D

Holy crap! Great story!

I love this story was tony meant to be the focus?

This is amazing. Beautifully written, I could sense the emotions in each setence. It had quite a good plot as well!
Overall, this is one amazing oneshot.

This was brilliant. Original, poignant and intense. I really enjoyed reading it. Hope you write more:)

This was dark, and original and unexpected but... I truly enjoyed It

Great story, by the way ;)