Update? Please!

a good story so far except for the fact that the world seemss to be stuck in a time warp its a 100 years latter and theres been no advance or chaange same cars, same school, same fashions, same everything wheres the imagination and inovation come on here. ALSO PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY.

Liar. you did abandon it. I can only think that your whole life must be the same. In the end You'll be alone and incomplete. No loss for and of us who trusted you , its what you deserve.

To add to my message of Feb. 2019 I would like to add that of all the unfinished stories on Fan Fiction, this is the one that I would most like to see finished. For what it's worth. Sasha Starr

Hi I know you haven’t updated in forever, But was just wondering if you plan on finishing this fantastic story? Or if you have published on another site? Seems a shame to let it go. Thanks

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I check on this every couple months or so but damn...DAMN. I appreciate and am so thankful for what you've written. And if you decide to write more I eagerly await it

Is there a chance that we can see the end of this story?

First thing I love this story it's got a good flow and is well written. The story itself is well thought out and perfectly detailed.

Second I don't know if you still even look at or read these reviews or you own stories anymore. I have to say that for an author that claimed they would never abandon and would definitely finish this story a call liar!. The last time you updated was back in 2015 we are now in 2020 I have to say 5 years is enough time to say that you have officially abandoned this story. I would love to have seen how it would have ended would the Voltori fallen would Joham been beaten. I guess we will never know will we ( what a shame ) was a great story. I know life can get in the way but you made a commitment to your fans to finish and you let us down. I hope you find that spark and try to finish this soon will keep checking from time to time for updates but not expecting much.

Again had the plot and makings of a great fanfic/story wish you could and or would continue soon.

Me encanta esta historia
Quiero saber si la vas a continuar

Es genial muy buena historia una de las mejores que é leído espero el próximo capítulo buena suerte Bay.

I hope you guys pick up this story again. I really love reading this story every few months, but i’ll admit that I am pining for the story to continue on. I really wish to see how everyone else reacts to finally hearing exactly what Bella had gone through and how that knowledge impacts their interactions and the further development of their ever growing family. I also wish to read more about if Rosalie finds herself having an even greater understanding of Isabella now that she knows what happened. Though the circumstances were different and the violence committed against both women were different in form, duration, and intent, they both suffered greatly and unjustly at the hands of a psychotic individual. I’m wondering if Rosalie will talk with Isabella about her own past, to let Bella know that to an extent she does understand some of the hell she had gone through and that she was there for her. I kinda hope to see if Esme will also talk about her own past, letting Bella know how much family actually means to her, and how much Edward’s actions and manipulations devastated her.

I know there is so much character development that can happen just from this last scene! Bella opening up about Victoria’s action’s against her opens so many avenues in character development, I feel like it would be almost like a kid in a candy store “Where to begin?” And of course trying to fit it all in at once because there is so much that can be done!)

I understand that life gets in the way of writing effectively, as a writer myself I completely get it, I’m just hoping that in time that your life will allow for you to continue writing.

If your muse is part of the problem, I would be happy to offer myself as a sounding board or to offer some suggestions. Anyway I am looking forward to your return to this story.

I didn’t catch it before, but just an FYI: there should be an ‘a’ at the end of the surname Irutlov. Unless I’m missing something and this an acronym or something, then all surnames in this form (Russian, Ukraine, etc) have a slightly different spelling between the sexes. A male’s Surname ending with a ‘v’ will remain as is (e.g. Irutlov). Though a Female’s surname ending in a ‘v’ would have an additional ‘a’ to denote that the person was female (e.g. Irutlova)

Best place to see this difference is when watching male and female figure skating and gymnastics.

Anyway I’ve loved this story since the first time I read it and I am on like the fifth or sixth read now. I hope one day you will finish the story, because it’s really good.

***** (5 Stars) This story is freaking AWESOME! I love the way that Bella is now Isabela and a bad ass. I would love to see this as a novel and a movie. Please let me know if you finished it and where to find it.

“Darkness..no parents...kinda makes it LEGO movies Batman solo song.)

angst angst angst. Love the angst.

Hmmmmm. I’m glad Isabella is still apart of the leadership. Rose is a pretty good fit. It’s just weird. It’s called the Swan Coven. I definitely don’t want rose pushing Isabella into things she not ready for thou.